Hi Susan, Many thanks for the review and comments below. All of the comments below are incorporated into revision 23.
Thanks, Neeraj On Thu, Oct 17, 2024 at 8:48 AM Susan Hares <sha...@ndzh.com> wrote: > BESS WG, BESS chairs, and authors: > > > > This is a requested review from IDR chairs for > draft-ietf-bess-evpn-unequal-lb-22.txt > > > > I’m not attaching a file because it is short. > > > > Cheerily, Sue Hares > > > > -------------- > > > > *Status:* Ready with nits (small technical nits and editorial nits) > > *Summary:* This is a very useful draft for EVPN. > > The draft has solid technical content and flow. > > A few minor edits will fill in the gaps. > > > > *Caveat:* Keyur Patel said he reviewed this draft, but non-of the chairs > (IDR and BESS) can find it. > > > > I’m sure Keyur review was great. I just can find it. > > > > *Editorial/technical issue: * > > > > Section 4.1 - you should clear state that value units outside of 0x00 or > 0x01 are invalid. > > Also, you should clearly state only 0x00 and 0x01 are valid. > > > > Section 4.1 - what happens if Extended Community is malformed? See > RFC7606. > > Please provide details. You are missing a clearly delineated section on > BGP error handling. > > > > *Editorial only: * > > > > 1) spelling check: > > > > 5.2 - recevied - paragraph 1, sentence 1 > > 5.2 - badwidth - paragraph 5, stanrding Please note. > > 6.2 - (VLAN-a % 4) - last paragraph. > > > > Section 10.0 - IANA considerastions needs to use a better formatting. > > > > > _______________________________________________ > BESS mailing list -- bess@ietf.org > To unsubscribe send an email to bess-le...@ietf.org >
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