Hi, Thanks Susan for the review and comments below. Will let you know once these have been incorporated into the document (hopefully, in the next couple of days).
Thanks, Neeraj On Thu, Oct 17, 2024 at 8:48 AM Susan Hares <sha...@ndzh.com> wrote: > BESS WG, BESS chairs, and authors: > > > > This is a requested review from IDR chairs for > draft-ietf-bess-evpn-unequal-lb-22.txt > > > > I’m not attaching a file because it is short. > > > > Cheerily, Sue Hares > > > > -------------- > > > > *Status:* Ready with nits (small technical nits and editorial nits) > > *Summary:* This is a very useful draft for EVPN. > > The draft has solid technical content and flow. > > A few minor edits will fill in the gaps. > > > > *Caveat:* Keyur Patel said he reviewed this draft, but non-of the chairs > (IDR and BESS) can find it. > > > > I’m sure Keyur review was great. I just can find it. > > > > *Editorial/technical issue: * > > > > Section 4.1 - you should clear state that value units outside of 0x00 or > 0x01 are invalid. > > Also, you should clearly state only 0x00 and 0x01 are valid. > > > > Section 4.1 - what happens if Extended Community is malformed? See > RFC7606. > > Please provide details. You are missing a clearly delineated section on > BGP error handling. > > > > *Editorial only: * > > > > 1) spelling check: > > > > 5.2 - recevied - paragraph 1, sentence 1 > > 5.2 - badwidth - paragraph 5, stanrding Please note. > > 6.2 - (VLAN-a % 4) - last paragraph. > > > > Section 10.0 - IANA considerastions needs to use a better formatting. > > > > > _______________________________________________ > BESS mailing list -- bess@ietf.org > To unsubscribe send an email to bess-le...@ietf.org >
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