Authors, Thank you for your replies. We have noted your approvals on the AUTH48 page for this document (https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9764). We will move this document forward in the publication process.
RFC Editor/ar > On Apr 3, 2025, at 1:52 PM, Albert Fu (BLOOMBERG/ 120 PARK) > <af...@bloomberg.net> wrote: > > Hi Alice, > > The final edits look good to me too. > > Thanks! > > Albert > > From: jh...@juniper.net At: 04/03/25 16:45:32 UTC-4:00 > To: aru...@staff.rfc-editor.org > Cc: Albert Fu (BLOOMBERG/ 120 PARK ) , bfd-...@ietf.org, > bfd-cha...@ietf.org, res...@yahoo.com, evyn...@cisco.com, > auth48archive@rfc-editor.org, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9764 <draft-ietf-bfd-large-packets-16> for > your review > > Alice, > > The final edits look fine. > > Albert should acknowledge hopefully shortly. > > -- Jeff > > > On 4/3/25, 16:16, "Alice Russo" <aru...@staff.rfc-editor.org > <mailto:aru...@staff.rfc-editor.org>> wrote: > > > [External Email. Be cautious of content] > > > > > Jeff, > > > Thank you for your reply. 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This page shows > the AUTH48 status of your document: > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9764__;!!NEt6yM > aO-gk!FzaeaQWcKusjfl28vMTSN9JwSaLG5fArOi_gKOPeNnRBbfi0qTJ5zDmgWYDrifkqYNR6EtIocw > 4PQXx8iBjY93c$ > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9764__;!!NE > t6yMaO-gk!FzaeaQWcKusjfl28vMTSN9JwSaLG5fArOi_gKOPeNnRBbfi0qTJ5zDmgWYDrifkqYNR6Et > Iocw4PQXx8iBjY93c$> > > > Thank you. > RFC Editor/ar > > > > Juniper Business Use Only > > On Apr 3, 2025, at 6:25 AM, Jeff Haas <jh...@juniper.net > <mailto:jh...@juniper.net>> wrote: > > > > Alice, > > > >> This diff file shows the changes made during AUTH48 thus far: > >> > https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9764-auth48dif > f.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!DulRqW5N_GWlzu33Fmtfm45VVwyWnf--B3I530cGoqDy5GC_m8mpNAUqw > 53KwGOTWAkA2hX2Fe29g63r7I_AK7Y$ > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9764-auth4 > 8diff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!DulRqW5N_GWlzu33Fmtfm45VVwyWnf--B3I530cGoqDy5GC_m8mpN > AUqw53KwGOTWAkA2hX2Fe29g63r7I_AK7Y$> > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9764-auth4 > 8diff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!DulRqW5N_GWlzu33Fmtfm45VVwyWnf--B3I530cGoqDy5GC_m8mpN > AUqw53KwGOTWAkA2hX2Fe29g63r7I_AK7Y$ > <https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9764-auth4 > 8diff.html__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!DulRqW5N_GWlzu33Fmtfm45VVwyWnf--B3I530cGoqDy5GC_m8mpN > AUqw53KwGOTWAkA2hX2Fe29g63r7I_AK7Y$>> > > > > The interdiff here looks fine, thanks. > > > >> Re: 4) Section 4.5, where "The above text" refers to the entire section, > >> per > your reply. This sentence has not been been updated. Please consider whether > it > would be more precise as follows. > >> > >> Orig: The above text also applies to most, if not all, BFD techniques. > >> Perhaps: This section applies to most, if not all, BFD techniques. > > > > The perhaps text is fine. > > > >> Re: 7) Security Considerations, you replied: > >>> The deviation was intentional, but perhaps may be better served by > preserving > >>> the original boilerplate while adding on the additional clarification > sentence. > >> > >> > >> We have not updated the document; please provide the new text. > > > > Proposed text: > > > > : Modules that use the groupings that are defined in this document > > : should identify the corresponding security considerations. For > > : example, reusing some of these groupings will expose privacy-related > > : information (e.g., 'node-example'). This module defines one such grouping, > > : "bfd-large-common", which contains the "pdu-size" data node whose security > > : considerations are documented above. > > > > The takes the boilerplate section you noted and appends the sentence that > > explains what, in this module, is applicable. > > > > ------ > > > > One further comment, Albert points out that the two instances of "1500" > > In the text should be "1512" for consistency with the example earlier > > In the document. > > > > -- Jeff > > > > > > Juniper Business Use Only > > > > > > -- auth48archive mailing list -- auth48archive@rfc-editor.org To unsubscribe send an email to auth48archive-le...@rfc-editor.org
