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> On Feb 6, 2025, at 2:46 PM, Madison Church <mchu...@staff.rfc-editor.org> 
> wrote:
> 
> Hi Tony,
> 
> Thank you for your reply. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status 
> page (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9696).
> 
> Once we receive approval from Dmitry, we will move this document forward in 
> the publication process.
> 
> Thank you,
> RFC Editor/mc
> 
>> On Feb 6, 2025, at 3:31 AM, Antoni Przygienda <p...@juniper.net> wrote:
>> 
>> I read it (finally) and mostly fine, observations that are all minor 
>> 
>> 
>> * ZTP acronym expansion removed, I think in first instance it’s helpful, 
>> same for ToF unless it’s introduced in the glossary  
>> * it’s rather Key-Value than Key-value or key-value IME
>> * the pure default route, there is only one so probably the definite article 
>> is superfluous * a “Multiple Plane_s_ Miscabling” 
>> * “but the operational reasons to reach” , looks like “the” is superfluous
>> * 
>> Please incorporate if they make sense or otherwise I’m ok with current 
>> content 
>> 
>> Thanks 
>> 
>> — Tony

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