I read it (finally) and mostly fine, observations that are all minor
* ZTP acronym expansion removed, I think in first instance it’s helpful, same for ToF unless it’s introduced in the glossary * it’s rather Key-Value than Key-value or key-value IME * the pure default route, there is only one so probably the definite article is superfluous * a “Multiple Plane_s_ Miscabling” * “but the operational reasons to reach” , looks like “the” is superfluous * Please incorporate if they make sense or otherwise I’m ok with current content Thanks — Tony
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