Hi Yeshwant, Apologies for my delayed reply. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 page <https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9695>. If possible, we would appreciate a confirmation directly from Chris that the document is also ready for publication.
Thanks for your help! RFC Editor/sg > On Jan 17, 2025, at 8:06 AM, Yeshwant Muthusamy <yeshw...@yeshvik.com> wrote: > > Hi Sandy, > > Chris and I have reviewed the diff files and updates and we are fine with the > final version. > > The document is APPROVED from the authors' perspective. > > Please let me know if there are any other actions for us. > > Thanks, > Yeshwant > > Yeshwant Muthusamy, Ph.D. > Owner and Principal > Yeshvik Solutions, LLC > www.yeshvik.com > +1 469-854-9836 > yeshw...@yeshvik.com > > On Thu, Jan 16, 2025, 9:08 PM Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > wrote: > Hi Yeshwant, Chris, > > Thank you for your review and for updating the XML. We have updated the > document - thank you for your explanations. Note that we updated the new > references to reflect accurate title information and include additional > author or organization information, as needed. Please review the current > files and let us know if additional updates are needed or if you approve the > RFC for publication. > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9695.xml > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9695.txt > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9695.pdf > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9695.html > > AUTH48 diffs (highlights recent updates): > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9695-auth48diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9695-auth48rfcdiff.html (side by > side) > > Comprehensive diffs: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9695-diff.html > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9695-rfcdiff.html (side by side) > > Thank you, > RFC Editor/sg > > > > > On Jan 15, 2025, at 9:21 AM, Yeshwant Muthusamy <yeshw...@yeshvik.com> > > wrote: > > > > Sandy, > > > > Please let me know if there is anything else needed from the authors (Chris > > and me). We are done with our changes/comments. You should have the revised > > XML file that I sent in the previous email. > > > > Thanks, > > Yeshwant > > > > > > Yeshwant Muthusamy, Ph.D. > > Owner and Principal > > Yeshvik Solutions, LLC > > www.yeshvik.com > > +1 469-854-9836 > > yeshw...@yeshvik.com > > > > > > > > On Fri, Jan 10, 2025 at 3:17 PM Yeshwant Muthusamy <yeshw...@yeshvik.com> > > wrote: > > Sandy, Others, > > > > Attached please find the XML source with the authors' comments and changes, > > in response to the comments marked [rfced] by the RFC Editors. > > > > FWIW, we've also included the revised output files (.txt and .html), > > generated using xml2rfc -v3, reflecting all the changes made (with the > > exception of the deleting the Terminology section - we have left that for > > the Editors). > > > > Authors' responses/comments/notes are clearly marked within the comment > > sections in the attached XML document. Examples: [AUTHORS' RESPONSE], > > [AUTHORS' NOTE], etc. > > > > Please let me know if something is unclear or if we have missed something. > > > > Thanks for your patience. > > > > Yeshwant > > > > > > > > Yeshwant Muthusamy, Ph.D. > > Owner and Principal > > Yeshvik Solutions, LLC > > www.yeshvik.com > > +1 469-854-9836 > > yeshw...@yeshvik.com > > > > > > > > On Fri, Jan 10, 2025 at 1:03 PM Sandy Ginoza <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> > > wrote: > > Hi Yeshwant, > > > > We will wait to hear from you and Chris - thank you for the update. > > > > Thank you, > > RFC Editor/sg > > > > > On Jan 10, 2025, at 10:55 AM, Yeshwant Muthusamy <yeshw...@yeshvik.com> > > > wrote: > > > > > > Sandy, > > > > > > I completed my changes/revisions based on the Editors' comments. I have > > > sent them to my co-author, Chris Ullrich, for his review and additions, > > > if any (as we are not in the same location). I hope to hear back from > > > Chris today. We will get back to you as soon as possible. > > > > > > Thanks for your patience. > > > > > > Yeshwant > > > > > > > > > > > > Yeshwant Muthusamy, Ph.D. > > > Owner and Principal > > > Yeshvik Solutions, LLC > > > www.yeshvik.com > > > +1 469-854-9836 > > > yeshw...@yeshvik.com > > > > > > > > > > > > On Fri, Jan 10, 2025 at 12:51 PM Sandy Ginoza > > > <sgin...@staff.rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > > Authors, > > > > > > We do not believe we have heard from you regarding the questions below. > > > Please let us know how we may resolve the items listed below. > > > > > > Thank you, > > > RFC Editor/sg > > > > > > > On Dec 23, 2024, at 11:12 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote: > > > > > > > > Authors, > > > > > > > > While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as > > > > necessary) > > > > the following questions, which are also in the XML file. > > > > > > > > 1) <!-- [rfced] Please insert any keywords (beyond those that appear in > > > > the title) for use on https://www.rfc-editor.org/search. --> > > > > > > > > > > > > 2) <!-- [rfced] We do believe the capitalized keywords are used in the > > > > RFC. > > > > Please review and let us know if any of the capitalized keywords should > > > > be > > > > used. Otherwise, we will remove the Terminology section and related > > > > references. > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > 1.1. Terminology > > > > > > > > The keywords MUST, MUST NOT, REQUIRED, SHALL, SHALL NOT, > > > > SHOULD,SHOULD NOT, RECOMMENDED, NOT RECOMMENDED, MAY, and OPTIONAL in > > > > this document are to be interpreted as described in BCP 14 [RFC2119] > > > > [RFC8174] when, and only when, they appear in all capitals, as shown > > > > here. > > > > > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > 3) <!-- [rfced] Would you like to include references for the sales data > > > > listed? > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > * iPhone (206+ million units sold in 2020): native support for > > > > haptic encoded data > > > > > > > > * Android (1.38+ billion units sold in 2020): API support of haptic > > > > buffers > > > > > > > > * W3C (HTML vibration API [W3C-Vibration]): Optionally supported in > > > > mobile web browsers. W3C has also defined vibration extensions > > > > for gamepads [W3C-Gamepad] > > > > > > > > * Game consoles (39+ million units sold in 2019): MS Xbox, Sony > > > > PlayStation, Nintendo Switch, etc. > > > > > > > > * XR devices (9+ million units sold in 2019): OpenXR haptic API > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > 4) <!-- [rfced] May we expand CE as Customer Edge? > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > Since they represent the majority of CE devices, a strong > > > > case can be made for 'haptics' as a top-level media type. > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > 5) <!-- [rfced] The text indicates the subtypes have not been > > > > registered by IANA, but ivs is being registered by this document. > > > > Please > > > > consider whether updates are needed. Is it correct that ivs is the > > > > only > > > > type mentioned in Section 2.5 being registered at this time? > > > > Note: likely different, but we see ogg has been registered as an > > > > application subtype (see > > > > https://www.iana.org/assignments/media-types/application/ogg). > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > While these subtypes have *not* been registered with IANA or > > > > standardized (yet), the prevalence of these haptic data formats in a > > > > large number of devices around the world, pre-dating the > > > > standardization of haptic tracks in ISOBMFF, provides a compelling > > > > argument for 'haptics' to be designated as a top-level media type: > > > > > > > > Perhaps remove mention of "not been registered with IANA? > > > > While these subtypes have *not* been standardized (yet), > > > > the prevalence of these haptic data formats in a > > > > large number of devices around the world, pre-dating the > > > > standardization of haptic tracks in ISOBMFF, provides a compelling > > > > argument for 'haptics' to be designated as a top-level media type: > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > 6) <!-- [rfced] hmpg and hjif are being registered by this document. > > > > Please consider how this text can be updated for accuracy. > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > These > > > > codes are not registered yet, but the plan is indeed to standardize > > > > these haptic coding formats in the near future. Once standardized, > > > > these types should also be registered as subtypes of the 'haptics' > > > > top-level media type: > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > 7) <!-- [rfced] For ease of the reader, we have updated "FourCC codes" > > > > as > > > > "FourCCs (four-character codes)". Alternatively, may we replace > > > > "FourCC" > > > > with "four-character codes", because this is the only place FourCC is > > > > used? > > > > Please review. > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > The MPEG ISOBMFF proposal included an informative annex of known > > > > haptic coding formats with proposed FourCC codes for them. > > > > > > > > Current: > > > > The MPEG ISOBMFF proposal included an informative annex of known > > > > haptic coding formats with proposed FourCCs (four-character codes) > > > > for them. > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > 8) <!-- [rfced] Should "URLL" be "URLLC"? If correct, may we expand > > > > URLLC > > > > as "Ultra-Reliable Low-Latency Communication (URLLC)"? If not, please > > > > indicate how URLL should be expanded. > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > * IEEE P1918.1.1 vibrotactile coding standard [IEEE-P191811] being > > > > developed under the IEEE Tactile Internet initiative as part of > > > > the 5G URLL profile. > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > 9) <!-- [rfced] [ISOBMFF-IS] This reference is the most current > > > > version of this standard, but there is a note on this version that > > > > states > > > > "Expected to be replaced by ISO/IEC DIS 14496-12.2 within the coming > > > > months." Please let us know if publication of this document should be > > > > delayed until ISO/IEC DIS 14496-12.2 is formally published > > > > (see https://www.iso.org/standard/85596.html). > > > > > > > > Original: > > > > [ISOBMFF-IS] > > > > "ISO/IEC 14496-12 (7th Edition) Information technology — > > > > > > > > Coding of audio-visual objects — Part 12: ISO base media > > > > > > > > file format", <https://www.iso.org/standard/83102.html>. > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > 10) <!-- [rfced] [IEEE-P191811] The original URL redirected to the > > > > search page for IEEE Standards: https://standards.ieee.org/standard/. > > > > We have updated the reference as described on > > > > https://ieeexplore.ieee.org/document/10555007. The status is marked as > > > > "Inactive - Draft". Please review and let us know if any updates are > > > > needed. > > > > > > > > [IEEE-P191811] > > > > "P1918.1.1 - Haptic Codecs for the Tactile Internet", > > > > <https://standards.ieee.org/project/1918_1_1.html>. > > > > --> > > > > > > > > > > > > 11) <!-- [rfced] Please review the "Inclusive Language" portion of the > > > > online Style Guide > > > > <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language> > > > > and let us know if any changes are needed. Updates of this nature > > > > typically result in more precise language, which is helpful for readers. > > > > > > > > For example, please consider whether the following should be updated: > > > > native > > > > > > > > Note that native can be ambiguous because it is subjective. 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