On 22/05/2025 21:02, Michael Richardson wrote:
Gorry Fairhurst<go...@erg.abdn.ac.uk> wrote:
     > OK. So, I am trying to work out what that sentence could read like if
     > it were to help people understand what you explain. Could it be
     > something like:

     > /potentially no transport layer security between Registrar-Agent and
     > pledge/use where there is no transport layer security between
     > Registrar-Agent and pledge/

Is this for section 5.1, where it says:

   * There is no trust assumption between the pledge and the Registrar-Agent
     as only authenticated self-contained objects are used, which are
     transported via the Registrar-Agent and provided either by the pledge or
     the domain registrar.

or did you have another place that you'd put this?

Ah, the original text I was commenting upon was in section 9, and is likely just too terse:

"Further privacy aspects need to be considered for:

 *

   the introduction of the additional component Registrar-Agent

 *

   potentially no transport layer security between Registrar-Agent and
   pledge"

I was uggetsing making this longer, even better to also add a cross reference to another section if there is one, this is a non-blocking comment, but it would be nice to see those two bullets as readable on their own.

Best wishes,

Gorry




     > - this comment relates only to not seeing what is being said, not to a
     > deeper problem.

     > Best wishes,

     > Gorry

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Michael Richardson<mcr+i...@sandelman.ca>   . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting )
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