My comment was based on the observation that the document discusses several 
aspects beyond directly modifying RFC 9325, as it also provides broader 
guidance on related topics.

I disagree.  It modifies 9325 and then the rest of the document gives the 
rationale for those decisions.  PQ is only one of the reasons. It gets its own 
detailed section because PQ is a common topic in the technical press these days.

If the intent is both to update RFC 9325 and provide broader guidance, it might 
be helpful to clarify this in the introduction or abstract.

I believe it cleanly updates 9325 and gives reasons for doing so.

Also, have you had a chance to review the suggestions made by Med in the 
following PR? GitHub 
Link<https://urldefense.com/v3/__https:/github.com/richsalz/draft-use-tls13/pull/6/files__;!!GjvTz_vk!RfdPF6WxjEEjlm25JC7js_6GUIFsuoPGmPyuUDGtweXvNQJyPoeIbUEKrDdJFNirEHVzJWLUz00AjvtJYq1CcW0$>.

Yes I have seen it, and I commented in the PR that I will merge it shortly.
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