> I found the part "and a DNS domain name of apps.example.net." to be
confusing, as I initially read it as "the combination of an application
service type ... and a DNS domain name of apps.example.net.", which is
not the case according to the following sentence.
So I suggest either removing this part, or changing it to something like
" and, separately, a DNS domain name of apps.example.net.".
Thanks for the feedback! Change made.
I am about to merge that change, the other diffs we have discussed on the
"Yaron" thread, and this change to meet the consensus called by the chairs:
- Identifiers such as IP address are not discussed. In addition, the focus of
+ Identifiers such as IP address are not discussed.
+ Protocols other than HTTP may want to consider
+ {{HTTP-SEMANTICS, Section 4.3.5}} as a validation model.
+ In addition, the focus of
I'm about to post a new version of the draft.
Thanks everyone for the feedback.
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