Hi,

My apologies for late response. I read the document and I generally found it in a good state and thus support its publication. I have one minor comment:

2nd paragraph of 6.4 reads:


   These identifiers provide an application service type portion to be
   checked, but that portion is combined only with the DNS domain name
   portion of the SRV-ID or URI-ID itself.  For example, if a client's
   list of reference identifiers includes an SRV-ID of _xmpp-
   client.im.example.org and a DNS-ID of apps.example.net, the client
   MUST check both the combination of an application service type of
   xmpp-client and a DNS domain name of im.example.org and a DNS domain
   name of apps.example.net.

I found the part "and a DNS domain name of apps.example.net." to be confusing, as I initially read it as "the combination of an application service type ... and a DNS domain name of apps.example.net.", which is not the case according to the following sentence.

So I suggest either removing this part, or changing it to something like " and, separately, a DNS domain name of apps.example.net.".

   However, the client MUST NOT check the
   combination of an application service type of xmpp-client and a DNS
   domain name of apps.example.net because it does not have an SRV-ID of
   _xmpp-client.apps.example.net in its list of reference identifiers.

Hi,

this message starts a Working Group Last Call for
draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis-06:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-uta-rfc6125bis/

The WGLC will last for two weeks and will end June the 27th.
Please send your comments to the list before this date.

Regards,
Leif & Valery.


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