Hi Simon, Thank you for the review. I believe we have addressed your comments in our version 04. Please see my comments inline.
Yours, Daniel -----Original Message----- From: TLS [mailto:tls-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Simon Friedberger Sent: Thursday, May 04, 2017 5:59 PM To: i...@ietf.org Cc: tls@ietf.org Subject: Re: [TLS] Last Call: <draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-03.txt> (ECDHE_PSK with AES-GCM and AES-CCM Cipher Suites for Transport Layer Security (TLS)) to Proposed Standard Nits: RFC 4279 reference is missing. MGLT: It seems the reference is mentioned in the current version in the Normative reference as well as in the introduction at line 127, in section 3 line 143. In case you meant another reference, please let us know. "TLS 1.3 and above version, " should probably be "TLS 1.3 and above" or "TLS 1.3 and higher versions" MGLT: Changed to "TLS 1.3 and higher versions" On 04/05/17 18:41, The IESG wrote: > The IESG has received a request from the Transport Layer Security WG > (tls) to consider the following document: > - 'ECDHE_PSK with AES-GCM and AES-CCM Cipher Suites for Transport Layer > Security (TLS)' > <draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-03.txt> as Proposed Standard > > The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits > final comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > i...@ietf.org mailing lists by 2017-05-18. Exceptionally, comments may > be sent to i...@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the > beginning of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > > Abstract > > > This document defines several new cipher suites for the Transport > Layer Security (TLS) protocol. The cipher suites are all based on > the Ephemeral Elliptic Curve Diffie-Hellman with Pre-Shared Key > (ECDHE_PSK) key exchange together with the Authenticated Encryption > with Associated Data (AEAD) algorithms AES-GCM and AES-CCM. PSK > provides light and efficient authentication, ECDHE provides perfect > forward secrecy, and AES-GCM and AES-CCM provides encryption and > integrity protection. > > > > > The file can be obtained via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead/ > > IESG discussion can be tracked via > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead/ballot/ > > > No IPR declarations have been submitted directly on this I-D. > > > > > _______________________________________________ > TLS mailing list > TLS@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tls _______________________________________________ TLS mailing list TLS@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tls _______________________________________________ TLS mailing list TLS@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tls
