On Thu, May 18, 2017 at 10:43:28AM -0600, Adam Weinberger wrote: > > On 18 May, 2017, at 10:24, Glen Barber <g...@freebsd.org> wrote: > > > > Author: gjb > > Date: Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017 > > New Revision: 318468 > > URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/318468 > > > > Log: > > Fix grammar nits. > > > > Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation > > > > Modified: > > stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml > > stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml > > > > Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml > > ============================================================================== > > --- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml Thu May > > 18 16:24:10 2017 (r318467) > > +++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml Thu May > > 18 16:24:11 2017 (r318468) > > @@ -555,7 +555,7 @@ > > </itemizedlist> > > > > <para>The following Sun &ultrasparc; systems are not tested but > > - believed to be also supported by &os;:</para> > > + believed to also be supported by &os;:</para> > > As long as we're picking grammar nits, you've split an infinitive there. I > think you want "believed also to be supported" or "believed to be supported > by &os; as well:". >
I like the wording from your second suggestion better anyway. Thanks. Glen
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