> On 18 May, 2017, at 10:24, Glen Barber <g...@freebsd.org> wrote: > > Author: gjb > Date: Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017 > New Revision: 318468 > URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/318468 > > Log: > Fix grammar nits. > > Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation > > Modified: > stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml > stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml > > Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml > ============================================================================== > --- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml Thu May > 18 16:24:10 2017 (r318467) > +++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml Thu May > 18 16:24:11 2017 (r318468) > @@ -555,7 +555,7 @@ > </itemizedlist> > > <para>The following Sun &ultrasparc; systems are not tested but > - believed to be also supported by &os;:</para> > + believed to also be supported by &os;:</para>
As long as we're picking grammar nits, you've split an infinitive there. I think you want "believed also to be supported" or "believed to be supported by &os; as well:". > > <itemizedlist> > <listitem> > @@ -581,7 +581,7 @@ > </itemizedlist> > > <para>The following Fujitsu &primepower; systems are not tested > - but believed to be also supported by &os;:</para> > + but believed to also be supported by &os;:</para> Same here. # Adam -- Adam Weinberger ad...@adamw.org https://www.adamw.org _______________________________________________ svn-src-all@freebsd.org mailing list https://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-src-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "svn-src-all-unsubscr...@freebsd.org"
