Author: gjb
Date: Thu May 18 16:24:11 2017
New Revision: 318468
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/318468
Log:
Fix grammar nits.
Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation
Modified:
stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml
stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml
Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml Thu May 18
16:24:10 2017 (r318467)
+++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/hardware/article.xml Thu May 18
16:24:11 2017 (r318468)
@@ -555,7 +555,7 @@
</itemizedlist>
<para>The following Sun &ultrasparc; systems are not tested but
- believed to be also supported by &os;:</para>
+ believed to also be supported by &os;:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
@@ -581,7 +581,7 @@
</itemizedlist>
<para>The following Fujitsu &primepower; systems are not tested
- but believed to be also supported by &os;:</para>
+ but believed to also be supported by &os;:</para>
<itemizedlist>
<listitem>
@@ -620,11 +620,11 @@
is highly recommended to try to keep the formatting of
this section consistent.
- We give manpage references using the &man entities where
- possible. If a driver has no manpage (and consequently no
+ We give manual page references using the &man entities where
+ possible. If a driver has no manual page (and consequently no
&man entity, we simply give the name of the driver).
Please avoid doing &man entity conversions unless you
- know for sure that an entity and manpage exist; sweeps through
+ know for sure that an entity and manual page exist; sweeps through
this file to fix "missed" conversions are likely to break the
build.
-->
Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml Thu May 18
16:24:10 2017 (r318467)
+++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/readme/article.xml Thu May 18
16:24:11 2017 (r318468)
@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@
<para>For any questions or general technical support issues,
please send mail to the &a.questions;.</para>
- <para>If you're tracking the &release.branch; development
+ <para>If you are tracking the &release.branch; development
efforts, you <emphasis>must</emphasis> join the &a.current;,
in order to keep abreast of recent developments and changes
that may affect the way you use and maintain the
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