Hi Yingzhen,
Thank you for your thoughtful suggestions, which helped improve the
document. I've applied those accordingly and uploaded the new version.
Please let me know the next steps to progress this draft.
Regards,
Greg
On Fri, Nov 22, 2024 at 7:26 PM Yingzhen Qu wrote:
> Hi Greg,
>
> Your
Hi Greg,
Your request is well received.
While I'm looking for a shepherd for this document, I'd suggest you update
the draft to reflect the publication of RFC 9568 (RFC5798bis), for example
please use "Backup Router" as in RFC 9568 instead of "Backup router".
Also the readability of the document
