Hi Yingzhen, Thank you for your thoughtful suggestions, which helped improve the document. I've applied those accordingly and uploaded the new version. Please let me know the next steps to progress this draft.
Regards, Greg On Fri, Nov 22, 2024 at 7:26 PM Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.i...@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi Greg, > > Your request is well received. > > While I'm looking for a shepherd for this document, I'd suggest you update > the draft to reflect the publication of RFC 9568 (RFC5798bis), for example > please use "Backup Router" as in RFC 9568 instead of "Backup router". > > Also the readability of the document could be further improved. Here is an > example for you to consider: > Old: > > This document discusses the applicability of Bidirectional Forwarding > Detection (BFD) for multipoint networks to provide Virtual Router > Redundancy Protocol with sub-second convergence for the process > determining the Active router and defines the extension to bootstrap > point-to-multipoint BFD session. > > > New: > > This document explores the applicability of Bidirectional Forwarding > > Detection (BFD) in multipoint networks to enable sub-second convergence > > in the Virtual Router Redundancy Protocol (VRRP) for determining the > > Active Router. Additionally, it defines extensions to bootstrap > > point-to-multipoint BFD sessions. > > > Thanks, > Yingzhen > > On Fri, Nov 22, 2024 at 8:55 AM Greg Mirsky <gregimir...@gmail.com> wrote: > >> Dear WG Chairs, >> the authors of draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-p2mp-bfd believe that it is ready >> for the WG LC. Draft was reviewed by SecDir, RtgDir, and OpsDir. According >> to the note from Joe Clarke >> <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rtgwg/w4AU2ftt6rb7ZueeG_y2vWBd7J8/>, >> we addressed all concerns of OpsDir in version -07. The draft is stable and >> defines a practical solution for fast convergence in the VRRP environment. >> We appreciate your consideration of opening WG LC on this document. >> >> Regards, >> Greg (on behalf of the authors) >> >
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