[Pce] Re: WG Adoption of draft-koldychev-pce-operational-09

2025-04-09 Thread xiong.quan
Hi WG, I think this document is useful and it helps me to understand the aspects of PCEP database. I support the adoption as an informational I-D. But I suggest to fix the following problems before adoption. 1,When I read this document, I found it a little hard to understand with the editorial

[Pce] Re: WG Adoption of draft-koldychev-pce-operational-09

2025-04-09 Thread Andrew Stone (Nokia)
Hi Tom, PCE WG Thank you for your comments and review: * Regarding authors - yes, agreed something to sort out. It was previously 5 but I hopped on to help being editor on it. One name will eventually need to drop * Agreed, we need to update the text to be impersonal and remove the "we

[Pce] Re: WG Adoption of draft-koldychev-pce-operational-09

2025-04-09 Thread Andrew Stone (Nokia)
Hi Quan, Thank you for your support and review. Will include all of your notes and suggestions when doing the next iteration. Fair point about the potential conflict in sentencing. I believe the intent was to help distinguish the objects a bit more since the term 'LSP' is used in different con

[Pce] Re: WG Adoption of draft-koldychev-pce-operational-09

2025-04-09 Thread xiong.quan
Hi Andrew, Thanks for your clarification! It is much better for understanding. It would be better to add your explanation into the section 4.1 and remove the sentence "A Tunnel is identified by PLSP-ID". And from my veiw, the LSPs and Tunnels are all RSVP-signaled objects. But in PCEP-sepcific