Re: [Live-demo] Review of istSOS Project Overview

2016-02-05 Thread Cameron Shorter
Hi Milan, I've reviewed the Project Overview in detail, and Quickstart briefly. I've made a few minor changes to wording, corrected a broken link, removed the bold formatting in a few places (as I felt it made the text harder to read and didn't look elegant). Interested to hear your thoughts?

Re: [Live-demo] Review of istSOS Project Overview

2016-02-04 Thread Angelos Tzotsos
Thanks Milan, We will review and merge your changes. Best, Angelos On Thu, Feb 4, 2016 at 5:59 PM, Milan Antonovic wrote: > Hi Cameron, > I've made some small tweaking (see the pull request on github) > I think that the text is ok now. > > Thank you very much > > Best regards > > _Milan > > >

Re: [Live-demo] Review of istSOS Project Overview

2016-02-03 Thread Cameron Shorter
Hi Milan, I've reviewed the istSOS Project Overview, made some minor changes to text, fixed a couple of issues with image sizes, fixed some link issues, and commited into git. I've made minor changes to the Quickstart, but haven't given it a detailed review. Next steps: * I suggest you have a

Re: [Live-demo] Review of istSOS Project Overview

2016-01-28 Thread Cameron Shorter
Oops, Please ignore last email. I see that Mlan has just sent updated text to my other email account. I'll review that over the next 48 hours or so. Warm regards, Cameron On Fri, Jan 29, 2016 at 8:06 AM, Cameron Shorter < cameron.shor...@lisasoft.com> wrote: > Hi Maxi, > We were discussing the i

Re: [Live-demo] Review of istSOS Project Overview

2016-01-28 Thread Cameron Shorter
Hi Maxi, We were discussing the istSOS Project Overview docs in our weekly OSGeo-Live meeting today. Have you had a chance to go back and re-check my original review (where I made a number of tweaks to the proposed text). I've re-attached my review text. (I suggest using my text as a basis, and if

Re: [Live-demo] Review of istSOS Project Overview

2016-01-28 Thread Angelos Tzotsos
Hi Maxi, I am referring to the quickstart and overview pages, in order to add to git and to the nightly builds. I was assuming that you would make a pull request. If not, I can add the documents directly. Best, Angelos On 01/28/2016 12:57 PM, Massimiliano Cannata wrote: Hi Angelos, thanks f

Re: [Live-demo] Review of istSOS Project Overview

2016-01-27 Thread Angelos Tzotsos
Hi Maxi and Milan, I have just completed an installer script for istSOS: https://github.com/OSGeo/OSGeoLive/pull/59/files This would be a good time to include the documentation too. Best, Angelos On 01/20/2016 09:25 AM, Cameron Shorter wrote: Hi Milan, I can see you have fixed the images. Tha

Re: [Live-demo] Review of istSOS Project Overview

2016-01-19 Thread Cameron Shorter
Hi Milan, I can see you have fixed the images. Thanks. I'm not sure if you noticed, but I made a number of updates to the text, primarily providing slight rewording of the English syntax, such that it aligns with the rest of the OSGeo-Live documentation. For instance, I had changed your: "* Offer

Re: [Live-demo] Review of istSOS Project Overview

2016-01-10 Thread Cameron Shorter
Hi Maxi, I've reviewed your istSOS Project Overview which is attached. Have you put this into git yet? If not, I suggest you do. Overall, it looks to be in pretty good shape. I've tweaked some of the syntax, and made some comments. Look for ".. Cameron comment:" My key comment is that the images