Hi Milan,
I've reviewed the Project Overview in detail, and Quickstart briefly.
I've made a few minor changes to wording, corrected a broken link, removed the bold formatting in a few places (as I felt it made the text harder to read and didn't look elegant). Interested to hear your thoughts?

I've pushed the changes to:
https://github.com/OSGeo/OSGeoLive-doc/pull/59

Warm regards, Cameron

On 5/02/2016 3:20 am, Angelos Tzotsos wrote:
Thanks Milan,

We will review and merge your changes.

Best,
Angelos

On Thu, Feb 4, 2016 at 5:59 PM, Milan Antonovic <milan.antono...@supsi.ch <mailto:milan.antono...@supsi.ch>> wrote:

    Hi Cameron,
    I've made some small tweaking (see the pull request on github)
    I think that the text is ok now.

    Thank you very much

    Best regards

     _Milan




    Il giorno mer 3 feb 2016 alle ore 21:52 Cameron Shorter
    <cameron.shor...@gmail.com <mailto:cameron.shor...@gmail.com>> ha
    scritto:

        Hi Milan,
        I've reviewed the istSOS Project Overview, made some minor
        changes to text, fixed a couple of issues with image sizes,
        fixed some link issues, and commited into git. I've made minor
        changes to the Quickstart, but haven't given it a detailed review.

        Next steps:
        * I suggest you have a look at the 52nSOS Project Overview and
        Quickstart, and see how istSOS compares, potentially tweaking
        your description.
        * Also have a look at the description changes I've made to the
        Project Overview, and see if they should be copied into the
        Quickstart.

        Warm regards, Cameron


        On 29/01/2016 3:07 am, Milan Antonovic wrote:
        Hi all,
        I've modified the file as suggested (in the attachment)
        Please let me if it's ok..

        Kind regards

         _Milan

        Il giorno gio 28 gen 2016 alle ore 15:13 Angelos Tzotsos
        <gcpp.kal...@gmail.com <mailto:gcpp.kal...@gmail.com>> ha
        scritto:

            Hi Maxi,

            I am referring to the quickstart and overview pages, in
            order to add to
            git and to the nightly builds.
            I was assuming that you would make a pull request. If
            not, I can add the
            documents directly.

            Best,
            Angelos

            On 01/28/2016 12:57 PM, Massimiliano Cannata wrote:
            > Hi Angelos,
            > thanks for completing the install.
            >
            > When you talk of documentation what do you refer to?
            >
            > The quickstart and the project description I have
            already provided to
            > Cameron?
            > Or to the istSOS documentation, which i guess should
            remain on the istsos
            > website?
            >
            > Thanks for clarification
            > Maxi
            >
            > 2016-01-28 0:11 GMT+01:00 Angelos Tzotsos
            <gcpp.kal...@gmail.com <mailto:gcpp.kal...@gmail.com>>:
            >
            >> Hi Maxi and Milan,
            >>
            >> I have just completed an installer script for istSOS:
            >> https://github.com/OSGeo/OSGeoLive/pull/59/files
            >>
            >> This would be a good time to include the documentation
            too.
            >>
            >> Best,
            >> Angelos
            >>
            >>
            >> On 01/20/2016 09:25 AM, Cameron Shorter wrote:
            >>
            >> Hi Milan,
            >> I can see you have fixed the images. Thanks.
            >> I'm not sure if you noticed, but I made a number of
            updates to the text,
            >> primarily providing slight rewording of the English
            syntax, such that it
            >> aligns with the rest of the OSGeo-Live documentation.
            >>
            >> For instance, I had changed your:
            >> "* Offer your data according to the Sensor Observation
            Service standard
            >> from Open Geospatial Consortium."
            >> to:
            >> "* Publish sensor data in accordance with the Sensor
            Observation Service (
            >> SOS) standard."
            >>
            >> Could you please have a look at the review I provided,
            and do a "diff"
            >> comparison with your text. Hopefully most of my
            suggested changes should be
            >> able to be used without changes.
            >>
            >> Warm regards, Cameron
            >>
            >> On Tue, Jan 19, 2016 at 2:01 AM, Milan Antonovic
            <milan.antono...@supsi.ch
            <mailto:milan.antono...@supsi.ch>>
            <milan.antono...@supsi.ch <mailto:milan.antono...@supsi.ch>>
            >> wrote:
            >>
            >>
            >> Hi Cameron,
            >> Thanks for your review. I modified texts and images
            following your
            >> comments.
            >> You will find the modifications in the attachment.
            >>
            >> Best regards
            >>
            >>   _Milan
            >>
            >>
            >> Il giorno dom 10 gen 2016 alle ore 22:54 Cameron
            Shorter <cameron.shor...@gmail.com
            <mailto:cameron.shor...@gmail.com>> ha scritto:
            >>
            >>
            >> Hi Maxi,
            >> I've reviewed your istSOS Project Overview which is
            attached.
            >> Have you put this into git yet? If not, I suggest you do.
            >> Overall, it looks to be in pretty good shape.
            >> I've tweaked some of the syntax, and made some
            comments. Look for "..
            >> Cameron comment:"
            >> My key comment is that the images are too large, which
            makes the layout
            >> look bad.
            >>
            >> Could you please review my suggestions, and if ok,
            please include into
            >> your git commit.
            >>
            >> Warm regards,
            >> Cameron Shorter
            >>
            >> On 23/12/2015 11:47 pm, Massimiliano Cannata wrote:
            >>
            >> Dear Cameron and OSGeo-Live team,
            >> in attachemnt you can find the documents required for
            setting up istSOS
            >> in the new Live-demo
            >>
            >> Please cnsider these as still in draft format, so that
            required changes
            >> can be done in the next future.
            >>
            >> Best,
            >> Maxi
            >>
            >> 2015-12-19 3:36 GMT+01:00 Cameron Shorter
            <cameron.shor...@gmail.com
            <mailto:cameron.shor...@gmail.com>>
            <cameron.shor...@gmail.com
            <mailto:cameron.shor...@gmail.com>>:
            >>
            >>
            >> Hi Massimiliano and Milan,
            >>
            >> If I look at the istSOS OpenHub metrics, it suggests
            that 95% of the
            >> code is javascript, however the project summary notes
            the project is
            >> written in Python.
            >>
            >> Would I be right in suspecting that your OpenHub entry
            is not accurately
            >> pointing at your source code?
            >> If so, could you please update OpenHub such that the
            metrics are more
            >> accurate.
            >>
            >> We encourage people to assess the quality of a project
            by looking at
            >> Open Hub metrics [2]
            >>
            >> [1] https://www.openhub.net/p/istsos
            >> [2] http://live.osgeo.org/en/metrics.html
            >>
            >>
            >> On 18/12/2015 8:33 am, Cameron Shorter wrote:
            >>
            >> Seems my last email was too big for the email list,
            here is the trimmed
            >> version:
            >>
            >> On 18/12/2015 8:18 am, Cameron Shorter wrote:
            >>
            >> Hi Massimiliano,
            >> We discussed including istSOS on OSGeo-Live in our
            weekly meeting today,
            >> and all present were in favour of it being included.
            So welcome to the
            >> OSGeo-Live community.
            >>
            >> Could you please focus first on working out your
            install process so that
            >> we can get istSOS into OSGeo-Live builds and start
            testing it.
            >>
            >> Then start working on the Project Overview and Quickstart.
            >>
            >> Could you also please start an email thread suggesting
            what dataset(s)
            >> should be used for istSOS.
            >> I suspect that your dataset needs would be similar to
            52 North SOS?
            >> There may be other datasets on OSGeo-Live which might
            be of use too?
            >>
            >> Ideally we'd like to ensure we use the same datasets
            across applications
            >>
            >> Warm regards, Cameron
            >>
            >> On 17/12/2015 7:52 pm, Massimiliano Cannata wrote:
            >>
            >> Dear Cameron, sear OSGeo-live team,
            >> here below you can find the istSOS application ofr
            being included in
            >> the next OSGeo live release.
            >>
            >>
            >> --
            >> Cameron Shorter,
            >> Software and Data Solutions Manager
            >> LISAsoft
            >> Suite 112, Jones Bay Wharf,
            >> 26 - 32 Pirrama Rd, Pyrmont NSW 2009
            >>
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            >>
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            >> --
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            >>
            >>
            >>
            >>
            >> --
            >> *Massimiliano Cannata*
            >>
            >> Professore SUPSI in ingegneria Geomatica
            >>
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            >>
            >>
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            >>
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            >>
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            >>
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            >>
            >> --
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            >> LISAsoft
            >> Suite 112, Jones Bay Wharf,
            >> 26 - 32 Pirrama Rd, Pyrmont NSW 2009
            >>
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-- Cameron Shorter,
        Software and Data Solutions Manager
        LISAsoft
        Suite 112, Jones Bay Wharf,
        26 - 32 Pirrama Rd, Pyrmont NSW 2009

        P+61 2 9009 5000 <tel:%2B61%202%209009%205000>,  Wwww.lisasoft.com 
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--
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OSGeo Charter Member
http://users.ntua.gr/tzotsos

--
Cameron Shorter,
Software and Data Solutions Manager
LISAsoft
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26 - 32 Pirrama Rd, Pyrmont NSW 2009

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