Re: [IPsec] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-qr-ikev2-10: (with COMMENT)

2020-01-13 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! > -Original Message- > From: Benjamin Kaduk > Sent: Monday, January 13, 2020 12:58 PM > To: Valery Smyslov > Cc: Roman Danyliw ; 'The IESG' ; > ipsec@ietf.org; ipsecme-cha...@ietf.org; david.walterm...@nist.gov; draft- > ietf-ipsecme-qr-ik...@ietf.o

Re: [IPsec] [Last-Call] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection-11.txt

2020-10-30 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Tom! > -Original Message- > From: tom petch > Sent: Friday, October 30, 2020 7:14 AM > To: Roman Danyliw ; Rafa Marin-Lopez > Cc: i2...@ietf.org; Fernando Pereniguez-Garcia > ; Gabriel Lopez ; > ynir.i...@gmail.com; last-c...@ietf.org > Subject: Re:

Re: [IPsec] [Last-Call] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-i2nsf-sdn-ipsec-flow-protection-11.txt

2020-10-30 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Tero! > -Original Message- > From: IPsec On Behalf Of Tero Kivinen > Sent: Friday, October 30, 2020 6:42 PM > To: Roman Danyliw > Cc: Fernando Pereniguez-Garcia ; > i2...@ietf.org; Gabriel Lopez ; ynir.i...@gmail.com; > ipsec@ietf.org; last-c...@ietf.org; Rafa Ma

[IPsec] AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis-05

2022-04-26 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! I performed a AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis-05. Thanks for revising RFC8229 with this new guidance. Comments are below: ** The abstract notes that many of the document updates came from deployment experience. I'm hoping to incorporate that feedback on a particular issue. T

[IPsec] AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12

2022-05-04 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12. Thank you for this work and the patience of the WG in getting it processed. I have a number of comments below, but the document is in good shape so please process them concurrently with the IETF LC feedback. ** Thank you for getti

[IPsec] AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-05

2022-05-06 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-05. Thanks for this complementary work to draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs. Feedback is below. ** Section 2. Editorial. s/ipsec/IPsec/ ** Section 2. Typo. s/to fll/to fill/ ** Section 2. Typo? Per "RFC [RFC9061] has a set of ", this st

Re: [IPsec] AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12

2022-05-06 Thread Roman Danyliw
> -Original Message- > From: Roman Danyliw > Sent: Wednesday, May 4, 2022 5:20 PM > To: ipsec@ietf.org WG > Subject: AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12 > > Hi! > > I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12. Thank you for this > work and the pa

Re: [IPsec] AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-yang-iptfs-05

2022-07-14 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Don! Thanks for the changes in -06. To keep things moving, I'll start the IETF LC and we can handle my residual feedback below concurrently. > -Original Message- > From: IPsec On Behalf Of Roman Danyliw > Sent: Friday, May 6, 2022 4:25 PM > To: ipsec@ietf.org WG

[IPsec] AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev1-algo-to-historic-06

2022-07-15 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev1-algo-to-historic-06. Thanks for this work to formally move the community to IKEv2. Based on the content of this document, I am assuming the WG intent is to follow option #3 of https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/designatin

[IPsec] AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-03

2022-07-21 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-03. Thanks for this companion document to the YANG module for IP-TFS management. Below is my feedback: To the idea that this MIB is redrived from the YANG modules: ** Consider if you want to use the same names for field values. I'

Re: [IPsec] AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-mib-iptfs-03

2022-09-20 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Don! Thanks for all of the changes. I snipped all of the text where the -04 addressed the issue. A few more comments below. I'm advancing the document to IETF LC. > -Original Message- > From: IPsec On Behalf Of Roman Danyliw > Sent: Thursday, July 21, 2022 2:27

[IPsec] AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-06

2022-09-30 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-06. Thanks for the work on this document. Per the shepherd write-up: ** Question 4 Several implementors have been integral in developing this document, thus implementors have indicated interest in implementing this. There i

Re: [IPsec] AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-06

2022-10-03 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Adreas! > -Original Message- > From: IPsec On Behalf Of Andreas Steffen > Sent: Saturday, October 1, 2022 7:29 AM > To: Roman Danyliw ; ipsec@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [IPsec] AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-06 > > On 01.10.22 00:19

Re: [IPsec] AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-06

2022-10-10 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! From: CJ Tjhai Sent: Tuesday, October 4, 2022 9:05 PM To: Roman Danyliw Cc: Valery Smyslov ; ipsec@ietf.org Subject: Re: [IPsec] AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-06 Hi Roman, Many thanks for the review, really appreciate it. We will update our draft and submit a revision

Re: [IPsec] AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-06

2022-10-10 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! Thanks for the explanation and the revised text in -07. I’m advancing the document to IETF LC. I have a few replies to consider with any additional IETF LC feedback. From: CJ Tjhai Sent: Tuesday, October 4, 2022 9:05 PM To: Roman Danyliw Cc: Valery Smyslov ; ipsec@ietf.org Subject: Re

Re: [IPsec] AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-06

2022-10-21 Thread Roman Danyliw
:08 AM To: Roman Danyliw Cc: Tero Kivinen ; Valery Smyslov ; ipsec@ietf.org ; Valery Smyslov Subject: Re: [IPsec] AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-multiple-ke-06 Hi Roman, We have updated our draft to incorporate Russ' feedback and also changes from IANA review. it also include

Re: [IPsec] Warren Kumari's Discuss on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev1-algo-to-historic-08: (with DISCUSS)

2022-12-15 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! From: IPsec On Behalf Of Warren Kumari Sent: Thursday, December 15, 2022 9:32 AM To: Paul Wouters Cc: The IESG ; draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev1-algo-to-histo...@ietf.org; ipsecme-cha...@ietf.org; ipsec@ietf.org; kivi...@iki.fi Subject: Re: [IPsec] Warren Kumari's Discuss on draft-ietf-ipsecme-i

[IPsec] AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-add-ike-08

2023-02-17 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-add-ike-08. Thanks for this document. Below is my feedback: ** Section 3.1 Section 3.1.5 of [I-D.ietf-add-dnr] lists a set of service parameters that are recommended to be supported by implementations. The referenced section in draft-ietf-add-d

Re: [IPsec] AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-add-ike-08

2023-03-02 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Med! Thanks for merging the substance of the discussion triggered from AD review into -09. I'm advancing the document. Roman > -Original Message- > From: IPsec On Behalf Of > mohamed.boucad...@orange.com > Sent: Monday, February 27, 2023 11:10 AM > To: R

[IPsec] AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-labeled-ipsec-09

2023-03-18 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! I conducted an AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-labeled-ipsec-09. Thanks for the work on this document. I have a few editorial recommendations that can be handled concurrently to IETF Last Call. ** Section 2.2. s/it MUST not install/it MUST NOT install/ since "MUST no" is not a keyword

[IPsec] AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-auth-announce-04

2023-10-25 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi! I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-auth-announce-04. Thanks for the work on this document. I have the following feedback: ** Section 3.1 If the initiator is configured to use Extensible Authentication Protocol (EAP) for authentication in IKEv2 (see Section 2.16 of [RFC7

Re: [IPsec] AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-auth-announce-04

2023-11-02 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Valery! Thanks for -05. Reducing the thread down to areas of discussion. > -Original Message- > From: Valery Smyslov > Sent: Thursday, October 26, 2023 11:51 AM > To: 'Roman Danyliw' ; ipsec@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [IPsec] AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsec

[IPsec] AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-multi-sa-performance-05

2024-03-18 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-multi-sa-performance-05. I have a mostly editorial feedback below: ** Abstract. Editorial. s/crypto/cryptography/ ** Section 1. Most IPsec implementations are currently limited to using one queue or CPU resource for a Child SA. -- (Ed

Re: [IPsec] AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-multi-sa-performance-05

2024-03-19 Thread Roman Danyliw
March 20, 2024 12:26 AM > To: Roman Danyliw > Cc: ipsec@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [IPsec] AD Review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-multi-sa-performance-05 > > Warning: External Sender - do not click links or open attachments unless you > recognize the sender and know the content is safe.

[IPsec] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-implicit-iv-07: (with COMMENT)

2019-10-15 Thread Roman Danyliw via Datatracker
Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ipsecme-implicit-iv-07: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please

[IPsec] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-qr-ikev2-10: (with COMMENT)

2020-01-08 Thread Roman Danyliw via Datatracker
Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ipsecme-qr-ikev2-10: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer

[IPsec] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-intermediate-09: (with COMMENT)

2022-03-01 Thread Roman Danyliw via Datatracker
Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-intermediate-09: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however

[IPsec] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-g-ikev2-21: (with COMMENT)

2025-02-11 Thread Roman Danyliw via Datatracker
Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ipsecme-g-ikev2-21: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to

[IPsec] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-qr-alt-08: (with COMMENT)

2025-05-19 Thread Roman Danyliw via Datatracker
Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-qr-alt-08: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please