Re: [Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-links-json-07

2017-04-25 Thread Carsten Bormann
Hi Elwyn, thank you for your review — that is a lot of good input. Before I start thinking about fixes for the WG to consider, let me comment on a few items: > Summary:Not ready for publication. There a number of issues that need > to be addressed as discussed below. In particular whether th

[Gen-art] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-core-links-json-07

2017-04-25 Thread Elwyn Davies
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review result: Not Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more inform

Re: [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-6man-rfc1981bis-06

2017-04-25 Thread Joe Touch
Hi, Stewart, On 4/24/2017 10:12 AM, Stewart Bryant wrote: > Minor issues: > > A node MUST NOT reduce its estimate of the Path MTU below the IPv6 > minimum link MTU. > > SB> I missed this last time. > SB> > SB> Presumably you mean "A node MUST NOT reduce its estimate of the > SB> Path MTU below

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-bchv-rfc6890bis-06

2017-04-25 Thread Paul Kyzivat
On 4/25/17 8:20 AM, Brian Haberman wrote: Hi Paul, On 4/22/17 3:23 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your doc

Re: [Gen-art] [I2nsf] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-12

2017-04-25 Thread Susan Hares
Dale: Thank you for the second review. I'll address these issues along with others later today. Sue Hares -Original Message- From: I2nsf [mailto:i2nsf-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Dale Worley Sent: Sunday, April 23, 2017 10:05 PM To: gen-art@ietf.org Cc: i2...@ietf.org; i...@ietf.

Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-bchv-rfc6890bis-06

2017-04-25 Thread Brian Haberman
Hi Paul, On 4/22/17 3:23 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the > IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your document > shepherd or AD before posting a