[Emu] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-emu-eaptlscert-05

2020-10-24 Thread Elwyn Davies via Datatracker
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more

[Emu] Proposed Resolution for TEAP errata 5768

2020-10-24 Thread Joseph Salowey
Errata 5768: https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5768 Proposed State: Verified Revision: Section 4.2.13. Says: Length 76 It should say: Length 36 plus the length of the 2 MAC fields Section 4.2.13. Says: EMSK Compound MAC The EMSK Compound MAC field is 20 octets. This

Re: [Emu] Proposed Resolution for TEAP errata 5768

2020-10-24 Thread Oleg Pekar
> 2 The EAP Type sent by the other party in the first TEAP message. This is a single octet encoded as (0x37) Shouldn't we clarify the motivation for placing the octet with TEAP type 0x37 into the BUFFER? Joe, I remember you explained that it is for protection against cross protocol attacks if Cry

[Emu] Proposed Resolution to TEAP Errata 5770

2020-10-24 Thread Joseph Salowey
Errata 5770: https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5770 Proposed Status: Verified Revision: Section 5.2 Says: On the sender of the Crypto-Binding TLV side: If the EMSK is not available, then the sender computes the Compound MAC using the MSK of the inner method. If the EMSK is ava

Re: [Emu] Proposed Resolution for TEAP errata 5768

2020-10-24 Thread Joseph Salowey
On Sat, Oct 24, 2020 at 4:29 PM Oleg Pekar wrote: > > 2 The EAP Type sent by the other party in the first TEAP message. This > is a single octet encoded as (0x37) > > Shouldn't we clarify the motivation for placing the octet with TEAP type > 0x37 into the BUFFER? Joe, I remember you explained th