[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9691 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Tom Harrison via auth48archive
Hi Madison, On Wed, Dec 04, 2024 at 11:30:03AM -0600, Madison Church wrote: > Thank you for your prompt reply (and apologies for missing those > edits earlier)! No worries at all, and thanks for your work on this. > We have updated the files accordingly. Please let us know if any > further upda

[auth48] Re: [AD] [C507] AUTH48 Questions: RFC-to-be 9665 and RFC-to-be 9664

2024-12-04 Thread Stuart Cheshire via auth48archive
On Dec 4, 2024, at 10:11, Sarah Tarrant wrote: > Authors and AD, > > Please see mail below regarding this document as well as our cluster-wide > email with questions relating to all three related documents. > > This document set has been in AUTH48 since mid-September. Please let us know > if

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9691 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread George Michaelson via auth48archive
I approve publication From: Madison Church Date: Thursday, 5 December 2024 at 3:30 am To: Tom Harrison , car...@lacnic.net , George Michaelson , t...@ripe.net , s...@hactrn.net Cc: RFC Editor , sidrops-...@ietf.org , sidrops-cha...@ietf.org , Russ Housley , Warren Kumari , auth48archive@rfc

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9691 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Carlos Martinez-Cagnazzo via auth48archive
Hi Madison, thanks for your detailed work. I approve for publication. /Carlos --- -- Carlos Martinez-Cagnazzo LACNIC On 2024-12-04 14:30, Madison Church wrote: Hi Tom, Thank you for your prompt reply (and apologies for missing those edits earlier)! We have updated the files accordingly. Ple

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9622 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Reese Enghardt via auth48archive
Hi all, Thank you so much for all the changes and discussion to align on them! As a co-author, I have reviewed the diffs and the recent HTML version, and I approve of the changes. Best, Reese On 12/4/24 10:03, Megan Ferguson wrote: All, Thank you for your replies. We have updated the tit

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9622 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Michael Welzl via auth48archive
Hi, About the title: IIRC after all these emails, the main concern from the RFC Editor was about the use of “Application Layer Interface” instead of “Application Programming Interface”. I was okay with changing this, but it seems that I created a mess by suggesting “The Transport Services Appl

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9622 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Michael Welzl via auth48archive
Hi, Just in case: as an editor, I confirm that I agree with Mirja’s suggestion below (and Gorry Fairhurst also agreed in a private email). Cheers, Michael > On 4 Dec 2024, at 08:27, Mirja Kuehlewind > wrote: > > Hi Megan, > > please see my answer below for your question, marked with [MK].

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9697 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Ties de Kock via auth48archive
Hi Sandy, I approve publication. Kind regards, Ties On Tue, 3 Dec 2024 at 21:32, Sandy Ginoza wrote: > Hi Job, > > Thanks for your review. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 page < > https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9697>. We will wait to hear from > your coauthor before continuin

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9622 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Anna Brunström via auth48archive
Hi all, The suggestion below looks good to me. I also agree to keep the titles of the other documents as is. BR, Anna -Original Message- From: Michael Welzl Sent: den 4 december 2024 11:10 To: Brian Trammell (IETF) Cc: Anna Brunström ; Mirja Kuehlewind ; Megan Ferguson ; Gorry Fairh

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9679 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Orie Steele via auth48archive
Thank you! "cose key" should be "COSE Key", We could add "COSE Key as described in Section 7 of RFC9052" and "JSON Web Key, as described in Section 4 of RFC7517" If the citations are helpful... This is a style nit. I approve of the changes. On Tue, Dec 3, 2024 at 3:48 PM Karen Moore wrote: >

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9665 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Sarah Tarrant via auth48archive
Authors and AD, Please see mail below regarding this document as well as our cluster-wide email with questions relating to all three related documents. This document set has been in AUTH48 since mid-September. Please let us know if there is anything we can do to facilitate moving the AUTH48 rev

[auth48] [AD] Re: [C507] AUTH48 Questions: RFC-to-be 9665 and RFC-to-be 9664

2024-12-04 Thread Sarah Tarrant via auth48archive
Authors and AD, Please see mail below regarding this document as well as our cluster-wide email with questions relating to all three related documents. This document set has been in AUTH48 since mid-September. Please let us know if there is anything we can do to facilitate moving the AUTH48 rev

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9623 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Michael Welzl via auth48archive
Dear RFC Editor, dear all, Please find below the answers to the questions regarding draft-ietf-taps-impl. I hope that my co-authors react in case they disagree with something - and I hope that sharing this in that way does not produce too much email traffic at this point. I tried to strike a ba

[auth48] [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9664 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Sarah Tarrant via auth48archive
Authors and AD, Please see mail below regarding this document as well as our cluster-wide email with questions relating to all three related documents. This document set has been in AUTH48 since mid-September. Please let us know if there is anything we can do to facilitate moving the AUTH48 rev

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9691 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Madison Church via auth48archive
Hi Tom, Thank you for your prompt reply (and apologies for missing those edits earlier)! We have updated the files accordingly. Please let us know if any further updates are necessary. We will await approvals from each author prior to moving forward in the publication process. The files have b

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9622 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Megan Ferguson via auth48archive
All, Thank you for your replies. We have updated the title and the lists as discussed below. The files have been posted here (please refresh): https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9622.txt https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9622.pdf https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9622.html http

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9679 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Hannes Tschofenig via auth48archive
Thanks for the edits. It looks good to me with the additional edits Orie proposed in his recent email. On Wed, Dec 4, 2024 at 4:27 PM Orie Steele wrote: > Thank you! > > "cose key" should be "COSE Key", > > We could add "COSE Key as described in Section 7 of RFC9052" and "JSON Web > Key, as desc

[auth48] [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9679 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Karen Moore via auth48archive
Hi Orie and *Paul (AD), We have updated the text with your additional suggested edits; the changes are now reflected in our files (links below). We now await approvals from Hannes and Paul. *Paul, please review the following changes and let us know if you approve. The updates can also be viewe

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9679 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Karen Moore via auth48archive
Hello Hannes, We have noted your approval of the document on the AUTH48 status page (https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9679). We now await approval from Paul. Best regards, RFC Editor/kc > On Dec 4, 2024, at 12:11 PM, Hannes Tschofenig > wrote: > > Thanks for the edits. It looks good to

[auth48] Re: [AD] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9664 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Ted Lemon via auth48archive
I have finished my work on both documents and have uploaded new versions on github. Stuart has some additional updates to make based on his review of the document, and we met to discuss his work this evening. I think he has some conflicts and won't be able to update until next week, but I also get

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9698 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Sandy Ginoza via auth48archive
Hi Arnt, We have made some of the updates described below, but we have a couple of followup comments/questions. Please see our comments in-line below. The current files are available here: https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9698.xml https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9698.txt ht

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9679 for your review

2024-12-04 Thread Michael Jones via auth48archive
Folks, I hate to do this, but in reviewing the newly added section, I realized that it was incorrectly using the term "claim". In both RFC 7800 and RFC 8747, "cnf" is a claim, whereas the JWT and CWT confirmation members are referred to as "members" - not "claims". Then I realized there other