Thank you!

"cose key" should be "COSE Key",

We could add "COSE Key as described in Section 7 of RFC9052" and "JSON Web
Key, as described in Section 4 of RFC7517"

If the citations are helpful... This is a style nit.

I approve of the changes.

On Tue, Dec 3, 2024 at 3:48 PM Karen Moore <kmo...@amsl.com> wrote:

> Authors,
>
> Thank you for the discussion and suggested changes.  Our files now reflect
> the updates below (see <
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-lastrfcdiff.html> for a
> snapshot of the changes). Please review and let us know if these changes
> are agreeable or if any further updates are needed. We will then ask the AD
> to approve them.
>
> 1) Section 5.3
>
> OLD:
>    Any party in possession of a key that is represented as a COSE Key can
>    use the COSE Key Thumbprint.
>
> NEW:
>    The only prerequisites are that the COSE_Key representation
>    of the key be defined and the party creating the COSE Key Thumbprint
>    be in possession of the necessary key material.
>
> ...
> 2) Addition of New Section. Note that we made “json web key” uppercase for
> consistency.
>
> NEW:
>    5.5 Relationship to JSON Web Key Thumbprints
>
>    The ckt of a cose key and jkt of a JSON Web Key are different, even
> when
>    underlying cryptographic key material is the same.
>
>    This document does not register a JWT claim for using ckt as a
> confirmation
>    method for a JWT or a CWT claim for using jkt as a confirmation method
> for a CWT.
>
> ...
> 3) Section 8
>
> OLD:
>    Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
>    Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
>    JWT Confirmation Method Name:  jkt
>
> NEW:
>    Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
>    Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
>    JWT Confirmation Method Name: (none)
>
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>
> > On Dec 3, 2024, at 7:55 AM, Hannes Tschofenig <
> hannes.tschofe...@gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > Thanks for the insightful comment, Orie. I agree with your proposed
> edits for the IANA consideration section and the extra text before the
> section on relationship to certificate thumbprints.
> >
> > I am also fine with the additional text Mike proposed.
> >
> > It is indeed too late to add new functionality at this point in time.
> >
> > Ciao
> > Hannes
> >
> >
> > On Tue, Dec 3, 2024 at 3:13 AM Michael Jones <
> michael_b_jo...@hotmail.com> wrote:
> > I support adding the section that Orie proposed.
> >
> >
> >
> > However in reviewing related text, I unfortunately found a problem.
> Reading
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-cose-key-thumbprint-06#section-5.3,
> it differs from https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7638#section-3.5 in a
> counterproductive and overly restrictive way.  Please change:
> >
> >
> >
> > Any party in possession of a key that is represented as a COSE Key can
> >
> > use the COSE Key Thumbprint.
> >
> >
> >
> > to:
> >
> >
> >
> > The only prerequisites are that the COSE_Key representation
> >
> > of the key be defined and the party creating the COSE Key Thumbprint
> >
> > be in possession of the necessary key material.
> >
> >
> >
> > That way it will be more actionable and will parallel the corresponding
> RFC 7638 text.
> >
> >
> >
> >                                                                 Thanks
> all,
> >
> >                                                                 -- Mike
> >
> >
> >
> > From: Orie Steele <orie@transmute.industries>
> > Sent: Monday, December 2, 2024 5:55 PM
> > To: Michael Jones <michael_b_jo...@hotmail.com>
> > Cc: Hannes Tschofenig <hannes.tschofe...@gmail.com>; Hannes Tschofenig <
> hannes.tschofe...@gmx.net>; RFC Editor <rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; Isobe
> Kohei <isobeko...@gmail.com>; cose-...@ietf.org; Cose Chairs Wg <
> cose-cha...@ietf.org>; Paul Wouters <paul.wout...@aiven.io>;
> auth48archive <auth48archive@rfc-editor.org>
> > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9679 <draft-ietf-cose-key-thumbprint-06>
> for your review
> >
> >
> >
> > Let's add a section to the document, before the section on relationship
> to certificate thumbprints.
> >
> >
> >
> > 5.5 Relationship to JSON Web Key Thumbprints
> >
> >
> >
> > The ckt of a cose key, and jkt of a json web key are different, even
> when underlying cryptographic key material is the same.
> >
> >
> >
> > This document does not register a JWT claim for using ckt as a
> confirmation method for a JWT, or a CWT claim for using jkt as a
> confirmation method for a CWT.
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > On Mon, Dec 2, 2024, 6:26 PM Orie Steele <orie@transmute.industries>
> wrote:
> >
> > I agree, let's just stick with the simple (none) solution.
> >
> >
> >
> > Hannes can you approve or suggest changes to the clarifying text that
> makes it clear this is not an oversight?
> >
> >
> >
> > Mike, do you object to that clarifying text assuming we take you change
> to the IANA considerations section?
> >
> >
> >
> > OS
> >
> >
> >
> > On Mon, Dec 2, 2024, 5:56 PM Michael Jones <michael_b_jo...@hotmail.com>
> wrote:
> >
> > I’m either fine with Orie’s proposed change to the registration wording
> or the following one:
> >
> >
> >
> > From:
> >
> >    Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >    Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >    JWT Confirmation Method Name:  jkt
> >
> > To:
> >
> >    Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >    Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >    JWT Confirmation Method Name: (none)
> >
> > For the record, I’m not OK trying to add a ckt JWT “cnf” method as an
> AUTH48 action (despite me appreciating Orie’s discussion of the
> possibility).
> >
> >
> >
> >                                                                 Cheers,
> >
> >                                                                 -- Mike
> >
> >
> >
> > From: Orie Steele <orie@transmute.industries>
> > Sent: Monday, December 2, 2024 2:55 PM
> > To: Hannes Tschofenig <hannes.tschofe...@gmail.com>
> > Cc: Hannes Tschofenig <hannes.tschofe...@gmx.net>; RFC Editor <
> rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org>; Isobe Kohei <isobeko...@gmail.com>;
> cose-...@ietf.org; Cose Chairs Wg <cose-cha...@ietf.org>; Michael Jones <
> michael_b_jo...@hotmail.com>; Paul Wouters <paul.wout...@aiven.io>;
> auth48archive@rfc-editor.org
> > Subject: Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9679 <draft-ietf-cose-key-thumbprint-06>
> for your review
> >
> >
> >
> > This is indeed a bug, for extra assurance that it is a problem:
> >
> > How would you use a ckt to verify a JWT that was using "cnf"?
> >
> > Here is a more complete fix for the bug:
> >
> >
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-cose-key-thumbprint-06#section-5.3
> >
> > Note that the ckt of a cose key, and jkt of a json web key are
> different, even when underlying cryptographic key material is the same.
> >
> > ckt is a binary string and jkt is always a base64url string encoded as
> described in section 6.1 of RFC9449.
> > To use a ckt claim inside a JWT, the ckt claim value MUST be base64url
> encoded.
> > The example provided in section 6.1 of RFC9449 is modified to
> distinguish confirmation with a CKT instead of JKT:
> > {
> >   "sub":"some...@example.com",
> >   "iss":"https://server.example.com";,
> >   "nbf":1562262611,
> >   "exp":1562266216,
> >   "cnf": {
> >     "ckt":"SWvYr63zB-WwjGSwQhv53AFSijRKQ72oj63RZp2iU-w"
> >   }
> > }
> >
> > I used the same base64url encoded thumbprint the draft already used for
> extra clarity.
> >
> > ckt would also need to be added here:
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/jwt/jwt.xhtml#confirmation-methods
> >
> > This kind of change might need to be taken to the relevant lists for
> review... and maybe another WGLC.
> >
> > ... we could leave the "ckt" in JWT cnf registration to another
> document, but I think at a minimum we need something added to section 5.3
> to the effect of:
> >
> > Note that the ckt of a cose key, and jkt of a json web key are
> different, even when underlying cryptographic key material is the same.
> > ckt is a binary string and jkt is always a base64url string encoded as
> described in section 6.1 of RFC9449.
> >
> > ^ If we are comfortable with this change alone, we still have a problem
> with the registration template:
> > https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8747.html#name-registration-template
> >
> > """
> > CWT claims should normally have a corresponding JWT claim. If a
> corresponding JWT claim would not make sense, the designated experts can
> choose to accept registrations for which the JWT Claim Name is listed as
> "N/A".
> > """
> >
> > The logical JWT claim is "ckt"... not "jkt"... so N/A... does not make
> sense... and leaving it blank also does not make sense.
> >
> > There is also the x5t claim which sets the precedent that ckt is for
> cose key, jkt is for json web key, and x5t is for x.509 certs.
> >
> > I propose:
> >
> > From:
> >
> >    Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >    Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >    JWT Confirmation Method Name:  jkt
> >
> > To:
> >
> >    Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >    Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >    JWT Confirmation Method Name: Not assigned by RFCXXXX ( not to be
> confused with x5t or jkt )
> >
> >
> > OS
> >
> >
> >
> > On Mon, Dec 2, 2024 at 4:14 PM Hannes Tschofenig <
> hannes.tschofe...@gmail.com> wrote:
> >
> > Thanks for the work on the draft and sorry for the slow response.
> >
> >
> >
> > I read through the draft carefully today and in general the edits look
> good but I noticed a possible bug.
> >
> >
> >
> > In the IANA consideration section we say that the ckt confirmation
> method maps to the jkt JWT configuration method. I double-checked RFC 9449,
> which defines the jkt, and it defines the computation as follows:
> >
> > "
> > The value of the jkt member MUST be the base64url encoding
> >
> > of the JWK SHA-256 Thumbprint.
> > "
> >
> > In draft-ietf-cose-key-thumbprint-06 we define the ckt thumbprint as the
> hash of the deterministic encoding of the COSE_Key structure.
> >
> >
> >
> > So, the question to me is whether we can even map the ckt to the jkt
> since the underlying structure that is hashed is different: JWK vs.
> COSE_Key structure.
> >
> >
> >
> > For that reason I believe it would be more correct to change the IANA
> consideration section by omitting the JWT Confirmation Method Name.
> >
> > Here is the proposed change:
> >
> > From:
> >
> >    Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >    Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >    JWT Confirmation Method Name:  jkt
> >
> >
> > To:
> >
> >    Confirmation Method Name:  ckt
> >    Confirmation Method Description:  COSE Key SHA-256 Thumbprint
> >    JWT Confirmation Method Name:
> >
> >
> > Do you agree with me?
> >
> >
> >
> > Sorry for noticing this issue only now.
> >
> >
> >
> > Ciao
> >
> > Hannes
> >
> >
> >
> > Betreff:
> >
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> >
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> >
> > Mon, 21 Oct 2024 14:30:59 -0700 (PDT)
> >
> > Von:
> >
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> >
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> >
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> >
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> > RFC9679 (draft-ietf-cose-key-thumbprint-06)
> >
> > Title : CBOR Object Signing and Encryption (COSE) Key Thumbprint
> > Author(s) : K. Isobe, H. Tschofenig, O. Steele
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