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>>> 
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>>>> 
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>>>>> On Sep 30, 2024, at 10:56 PM, rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org wrote:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Authors,
>>>>> 
>>>>> While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as 
>>>>> necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 1) <!--[rfced] Should "services" be "servers" here to match previous,
>>>>> similar text?  And perhaps avoiding the two "provide" uses so
>>>>> close together would be helpful for the reader?
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> DNS-Based Service Discovery (DNS-SD) allows services to advertise
>>>>> the fact that they provide service, and to provide the
>>>>> information required to access that service.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> DNS-SD allows servers to advertise the fact that they provide
>>>>> service and to share the information required to access that
>>>>> service.
>>>>> 
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 2) <!--[rfced] To what does "that" refer in this sentence?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> As long as the registration service remembers the name and the key
>>>>> used to register that name, no other server can add or update the
>>>>> information associated with that.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> As long as the registration service remembers the name and the key
>>>>> used to register that name, no other server can add or update the
>>>>> information associated with them.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> As long as the registration service remembers the name and the key
>>>>> used to register that name, no other server can add or update the
>>>>> information associated with that pair.
>>>>> 
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 3) <!--[rfced] How might we clarify "this" for the ease of the reader
>>>>> (especially as this sentence is the first of the paragraph)?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> Note that this does not update [RFC2782]: DNS servers still MUST
>>>>> NOT compress SRV record targets.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 4) <!-- [rfced] FYI - we updated the list as follows for clarity. Please 
>>>>> let us know if there are any objections.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> An instruction is a Service Discovery Instruction if it contains
>>>>> 
>>>>> *  exactly one "Add to an RRSet" ([RFC2136], Section 2.5.1) or
>>>>>  exactly one "Delete an RR from an RRSet" ([RFC2136],
>>>>>  Section 2.5.4) RR update,
>>>>> *  which updates a PTR RR,
>>>>> *  the target of which is a Service Instance Name
>>>>> *  for which name a Service Description Instruction is present in the
>>>>>  SRP Update, and:
>>>>>  -  if the RR Update is an "Add to an RRSet" instruction, that
>>>>>     Service Description Instruction contains an "Add to an RRset"
>>>>>     RR update for the SRV RR describing that service and no other
>>>>>     "Delete from an RRset" instructions for that Service Instance
>>>>>     Name; or
>>>>>  -  if the RR Update is a "Delete an RR from an RRSet" instruction,
>>>>>     that Service Description Instruction contains a "Delete from an
>>>>>     RRset" RR update and no other "Add to an RRset" instructions
>>>>>     for that Service Instance Name.
>>>>> *  and contains no other add or delete RR updates for the same name
>>>>>  as the PTR RR Update.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Current:
>>>>> An instruction is a Service Discovery Instruction if it:
>>>>> 
>>>>> *  Contains exactly one "Add to an RRSet" (Section 2.5.1 of
>>>>>  [RFC2136]) or exactly one "Delete an RR from an RRSet"
>>>>>  (Section 2.5.4 of [RFC2136]) RR update, which updates a PTR RR;
>>>>>  the target of which is a Service Instance Name for which name a
>>>>>  Service Description Instruction is present in the SRP Update.
>>>>>  Additionally:
>>>>> 
>>>>>  -  If the RR Update is an "Add to an RRSet" instruction, that
>>>>>     Service Description Instruction contains an "Add to an RRset"
>>>>>     RR update for the SRV RR describing that service and no other
>>>>>     "Delete from an RRset" instructions for that Service Instance
>>>>>     Name.
>>>>>  -  If the RR Update is a "Delete an RR from an RRSet" instruction,
>>>>>     that Service Description Instruction contains a "Delete from an
>>>>>     RRset" RR update and no other "Add to an RRset" instructions
>>>>>     for that Service Instance Name.
>>>>> 
>>>>> *  Contains no other add or delete RR updates for the same name as
>>>>>  the PTR RR Update.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 5) <!--[rfced] For the ease of the reader, might we clarify what "these
>>>>> conditions" are?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> Assuming that a DNS Update message has been validated with these
>>>>> conditions and is a valid SRP Update, the SRP registrar checks that
>>>>> the name in the Host Description Instruction exists.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> Assuming that a DNS Update message has been validated with an FCFS name
>>>>> and signature and is a valid SRP Update, the SRP registrar checks that
>>>>> the name in the Host Description Instruction exists. 
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 6) <!--[rfced] Please review this transition sentence. Because it is
>>>>> placed at the beginning of a new paragraph, the "Otherwise" might
>>>>> be a bit jarring to the reader.  (Our suggestion is likely weak,
>>>>> but for demonstrative purposes...)
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> Otherwise, the SRP registrar validates the SRP Update using SIG(0)
>>>>> against the public key in the KEY record of the Host Description
>>>>> Instruction.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> If the above steps are not taken, the SRP registrar validates the
>>>>> SRP Update using SIG(0) against the public key in the KEY record of
>>>>> the Host Description Instruction.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 7) <!-- [rfced] In Section 5.1, we see both "N" and "'n'". Please review
>>>>> and let us know if/how we may update for uniformity.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original "N":
>>>>> SRP requestors SHOULD assume that each lease ends N seconds after the
>>>>> update was first transmitted, where N is the lease duration. 
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original "'n'":
>>>>> The lease time is never sent as a TTL; its
>>>>> sole purpose is to determine when the authoritative DNS server will
>>>>> delete stale records.  It is not an error to send a DNS response with
>>>>> a TTL of 'n' when the remaining time on the lease is less than 'n'.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 8) <!-- [rfced] In the following text, before the two numbered points,
>>>>> the text reads "There are three considerations". Should we update
>>>>> "three" to "two", or is there another point that the text is
>>>>> missing?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Current:
>>>>> There are three considerations for caching DNS servers that follow
>>>>> this specification:
>>>>> 
>>>>> 1.  For correctness, recursive resolvers at sites using
>>>>>   'service.arpa.' must, in practice, transparently support DNSSEC
>>>>>   queries: queries for DNSSEC records and queries with the DNSSEC
>>>>>   OK (DO) bit set (Section 3.2.1 of [RFC4035]).  DNSSEC validation
>>>>>   is a Best Current Practice ([RFC9364]): although validation is not
>>>>>   required, a caching recursive resolver that does not validate
>>>>>   answers that can be validated may cache invalid data.  In turn,
>>>>>   this would prevent validating stub resolvers from successfully
>>>>>   validating answers.  Hence, as a practical matter, recursive
>>>>>   resolvers at sites using 'service.arpa' should do DNSSEC
>>>>>   validation.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 2.  Unless configured otherwise, recursive resolvers and DNS proxies
>>>>>   MUST behave as described in Locally Served Zones (Section 3 of
>>>>>   [RFC6303]).  That is, queries for 'service.arpa.' and subdomains
>>>>>   of 'service.arpa.'  MUST NOT be forwarded, with one important
>>>>>   exception: a query for a DS record with the DO bit set MUST
>>>>>   return the correct answer for that question, including correct
>>>>>   information in the authority section that proves that the record
>>>>>   is nonexistent.
>>>>> 
>>>>>   So, for example, a query for the NS record for 'service.arpa.'
>>>>>   MUST NOT result in that query being forwarded to an upstream
>>>>>   cache nor to the authoritative DNS server for '.arpa.'.  However,
>>>>>   as necessary to provide accurate authority information, a query
>>>>>   for the DS record MUST result in forwarding whatever queries are
>>>>>   necessary.  Typically, this will just be a query for the DS
>>>>>   record since the necessary authority information will be included
>>>>>   in the authority section of the response if the DO bit is set.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 9) <!--[rfced] Is this text redundant (with two uses of necessary)?  Does 
>>>>> our suggestion change your intended meaning?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> However, as necessary to provide accurate authority information, a
>>>>> query for the DS record MUST result in forwarding whatever queries are
>>>>> necessary; typically, ...
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> However, to provide accurate authority information, a
>>>>> query for the DS record MUST result in forwarding whatever queries are
>>>>> necessary.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 10) <!--[rfced] We are having trouble parsing this sentence. Is there text
>>>>> missing?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> The operator for the DNS servers authoritative for 'service.arpa.' in
>>>>> the global DNS will configure any such servers as described in Section
>>>>> 9.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> The operator for the DNS servers that are authoritative for 
>>>>> "service.arpa." in the global DNS will configure any such servers as 
>>>>> described in Section
>>>>> 9.
>>>>> 
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 11) <!--[rfced] We have some questions about Section 10.1 in the IANA
>>>>> Considerations:
>>>>> 
>>>>> a) We see the title of the section is related to the first paragraph
>>>>> only.  May we move the second paragraph to its own subsection?  If so,
>>>>> please let us know how you would like the text to appear using
>>>>> Old/New.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> 
>>>>> 10.1.  Registration and Delegation of 'service.arpa' as a Special-Use
>>>>>   Domain Name
>>>>> 
>>>>> IANA is requested to record the domain name 'service.arpa.' in the
>>>>> Special-Use Domain Names registry [SUDN].  IANA is requested, with
>>>>> the approval of IAB, to implement the delegation requested in
>>>>> Section 9.
>>>>> 
>>>>> IANA is further requested to add a new entry to the "Transport-
>>>>> Independent Locally-Served Zones" subregistry of the "Locally-Served
>>>>> DNS Zones" registry [LSDZ].  The entry will be for the domain
>>>>> 'service.arpa.' with the description "DNS-SD Service Registration
>>>>> Protocol Special-Use Domain", and listing this document as the
>>>>> reference.
>>>>> 
>>>>> b) The first paragraph of Section 10.1 mentions Section 9, which
>>>>> states:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> 9.  Delegation of 'service.arpa.'
>>>>> 
>>>>> In order to be fully functional, the owner of the 'arpa.' zone must
>>>>> add a delegation of 'service.arpa.' in the '.arpa.' zone [RFC3172].
>>>>> This delegation is to be set up as was done for 'home.arpa', as a
>>>>> result of the specification in Section 7 of [RFC8375].  This is
>>>>> currently the responsibility of the IAB [IAB-ARPA]
>>>>> 
>>>>> Should Section 9 be updated as follows since this action has been
>>>>> taken?  Also, please review whether this information actually belongs
>>>>> in the IANA section.  If so, please let us know (using old/new) how to
>>>>> update.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 9.  Delegation of "service.arpa."
>>>>> 
>>>>> The owner of the 'arpa.' zone, at the time of writing the IAB [IAB-ARPA],
>>>>> has added a delegation of 'service.arpa.' in the '.arpa.' zone
>>>>> [RFC3172], following the guidance provided in Section 7 of [RFC8375].
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 12) <!-- [rfced] Normative reference RFC 3445 has been obsoleted by
>>>>> RFC 4033.  We will update to the latter unless we hear objection.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 13)   <!--[rfced] Might this be an agreeable update to the title of
>>>>>   Appendix A (to avoid double -ing words in the beginning?)?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Appendix A.  Testing Using Standard DNS Servers Compliant with RFC
>>>>> 2136
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Appendix A.  Testing the Use of Standard DNS Servers Compliant with RFC
>>>>> 2136
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Appendix A.  Testing Standard DNS Servers Compliant with RFC 2136
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 14) <!-- [rfced] We had some questions about abbreviations:
>>>>> 
>>>>> a) Should "DNSSD" (in "non-DNSSD services" and "DNSSD discovery zone")
>>>>> be updated to "DNS-SD" (hyphen) or "dnssd" (lowercase) to match prior
>>>>> usage in the document?
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> b) Is the "Service" (or "Service Description") redundant here and in
>>>>> similar cases throughout the document (as SD = Service Discovery)?
>>>>> That is, just examples below, more cases exist.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> DNS-SD Service registration uses public keys and SIG(0) to allow
>>>>> services to defend their registrations.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> Although in principle DNS-SD Service Description records can
>>>>> include other record types with the same Service Instance Name, in
>>>>> practice they rarely do.
>>>>> 
>>>>> c) For "TSIG", would you like us to expand to "transaction signature"
>>>>> upon first usage to match RFC 8945?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> The format of the KEY resource record in the SRP Update is defined in
>>>>> [RFC3445].  Because the KEY RR used in TSIG is not a zone-signing
>>>>> key, the flags field in the KEY RR MUST be all zeroes.
>>>>> 
>>>>> d) Throughout the document, "SRP update" is used, and there is only
>>>>> one instance of "SRV update". We wanted to make sure that "SRV" was
>>>>> indeed intended and not "SRP".
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> *  If there is one "Add to an RRset" SRV update, there MUST be at
>>>>> least one "Add to an RRset" TXT update.
>>>>> 
>>>>> e) We have updated to use the abbreviation CNN for Constrained-Node
>>>>> Network (to match its use in RFC 7228).  Please review and let us know
>>>>> any objections.  Further, please review uses of "constrained network"
>>>>> and let us know if any of these should be updated to CNN as well.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 15) <!-- [rfced] We had some questions regarding capitalization of 
>>>>> certain terms:
>>>>> 
>>>>> a) We see instances of "Anycast" (capitalized) and "anycast"
>>>>> (lowercase) throughout the document, but we are unsure if certain
>>>>> instances are part of proper names while other instances are more
>>>>> generic. Please let us know if these need to be made more consistent
>>>>> or if they are accurate as they currently are. We've listed a few
>>>>> instances below.
>>>>> 
>>>>> Anycast vs. anycast:
>>>>> IPv6 Anycast address
>>>>> Port Control Protocol anycast address
>>>>> fixed anycast address
>>>>> anycast address
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> b) We see the following similar terms.  Please review and let us know
>>>>> if/how to make these terms consistent.
>>>>> 
>>>>> service instance name 
>>>>> Service Instance Name
>>>>> "Service Instance Name"
>>>>> service instance
>>>>> Service Name
>>>>> 
>>>>> c) We see the following similar terms.  Please let us know how to
>>>>> update for consistency.
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> BIND 9 vs. BIND9
>>>>> 
>>>>> d) We have updated the quoted terms that correspond to Sections 2.5.1
>>>>> - 2.5.4 of RFC 2136 to appear consistently in double quotes and with
>>>>> capitalization that matches those section titles.  Please let us know
>>>>> any objections.
>>>>> 
>>>>> We further wondered if the following update should be made:
>>>>> 
>>>>> Original:
>>>>> The target of the SRV RR Add...
>>>>> 
>>>>> Perhaps:
>>>>> The "Add To An RRset" SRV update
>>>>> 
>>>>> Please review other terms similar to these titles if they exist and
>>>>> let us know if any further changes should be made.
>>>>> 
>>>>> e) The NoError status names are in all caps in Section 2.2 of RFC
>>>>> 2136.  Should the following updates be made to match?
>>>>> 
>>>>> ServFail to SERVFAIL
>>>>> Refused to REFUSED
>>>>> YXDomain to YXDOMAIN
>>>>> 
>>>>> f) Regarding the terms “Service Description”, Service Discovery, and
>>>>> “Host Description”.
>>>>> 
>>>>> - We see both Instruction and instruction when following these terms.
>>>>> If/How may we make this uniform?
>>>>> 
>>>>> - Should “instruction” or the like should be inserted after instances
>>>>> of these terms?  Sometimes they are followed by "record" or "update",
>>>>> if they appear without a label, might this be confusing to the reader?
>>>>> 
>>>>> Example:
>>>>> The KEY record in Service Description updates MAY be omitted for
>>>>> brevity; if it is omitted, the SRP registrar MUST behave as if the
>>>>> same KEY record that is given for the Host Description is also given
>>>>> for each Service Description for which no KEY record is provided.
>>>>> 
>>>>> g) Please review the following similar terms and let us know if/how
>>>>> they should be made uniform with regard to quotes and ending with a
>>>>> period (note that this term would have IANA implications):
>>>>> 
>>>>> "default.service.arpa"
>>>>> "default.service.arpa."
>>>>> host.default.service.arpa
>>>>> host-1.default.service.arpa
>>>>> host-2.default.service.arpa
>>>>> host-31773.default.service.arpa. (at end of sentence)
>>>>> ".service.arpa."
>>>>> "service.arpa"
>>>>> "service.arpa."
>>>>> 
>>>>> Further note that we have updated from single to double quotes around
>>>>> terms that were quoted in the original consistently.  Please review
>>>>> and let us know if further updates are necessary.
>>>>> 
>>>>> h) Please review the following for the use of quotes and consistent
>>>>> use of SRV record.  Please let us know if/how to update.
>>>>> 
>>>>> "_dnssd-srp._tcp.<zone>" SRV record vs.  _dnssd-srp._tcp.<zone> SRV  
>>>>> "_dnssd-srp-tls._tcp.<zone>"  SRV record vs. _dnssd-srp-tls._tcp.<zone> 
>>>>> record 
>>>>> _dns-update._udp SRV
>>>>> 
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> 16) <!-- [rfced] Please review each artwork element in Appendix C in case
>>>>> they should be tagged as sourcecode or another element.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
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>>>>> <https://www.rfc-editor.org/styleguide/part2/#inclusive_language>
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>>>>> 
>>>>> Note that our script did not flag any words in particular, but this
>>>>> should still be reviewed as a best practice.
>>>>> -->
>>>>> 
>>>>> 
>>>>> Thank you.
>>>>> 
>>>>> RFC Editor/st/mf
>>>>> 
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>>>>> --------------------------------------
>>>>> RFC9665 (draft-ietf-dnssd-srp-25)
>>>>> 
>>>>> Title            : Service Registration Protocol for DNS-Based Service 
>>>>> Discovery
>>>>> Author(s)        : T. Lemon, S. Cheshire
>>>>> WG Chair(s)      : Chris Box, David Schinazi
>>>>> Area Director(s) : Erik Kline, Éric Vyncke
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