[auth48] Re: Cluster-Wide Questions for Cluster 508: RFCs 9621, 9622, and 9623 (draft-ietf-taps-arch-19, draft-ietf-taps-interface-26, and draft-ietf-taps-impl-18)

2024-12-18 Thread God Chosen via auth48archive
New Local Endpoint On Thu, 19 Dec 2024, 6:13 am Michael Welzl via auth48archive, < auth48archive@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > Dear RFC Editor staff, > > I agree with all the changes in all the files. I also agree with this > comment from Colin: > *** > RFC 9621 Section 4.1.4, first paragraph (“Initia

[auth48] Re: Cluster-Wide Questions for Cluster 508: RFCs 9621, 9622, and 9623 (draft-ietf-taps-arch-19, draft-ietf-taps-interface-26, and draft-ietf-taps-impl-18)

2024-12-18 Thread Michael Welzl via auth48archive
Dear RFC Editor staff, I agree with all the changes in all the files. I also agree with this comment from Colin: *** RFC 9621 Section 4.1.4, first paragraph (“Initiate”) ends with “occurs in response to the calling Initiate” (changed from “…to the Initiate call”) but should perhaps say “…in res

[auth48] Re: Cluster-Wide Questions for Cluster 508: RFCs 9621, 9622, and 9623 (draft-ietf-taps-arch-19, draft-ietf-taps-interface-26, and draft-ietf-taps-impl-18)

2024-12-18 Thread Michael Welzl via auth48archive
Hi Reese, Many thanks for your thorough check! Please see my answers below. ALL: I give quite long answers to the “Cellular” and “Protocol Instance” ” questions below because they serve as a great example to explain what I’ve done, and why. Maybe you want to read this and chime in. > On Dec

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9707 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Dhruv Dhody via auth48archive
Hi Lynne, On Thu, Dec 19, 2024 at 1:12 AM Lynne Bartholomew wrote: > Hi, Dhruv. > > Thank you for your prompt replies! > > Thanks also for the updated email address for Mallory. Is "Center for > Democracy and Technology" in Appendix C still correct? > > Dhruv: Mallory has responded to this and

[auth48] Re: Cluster-Wide Questions for Cluster 508: RFCs 9621, 9622, and 9623 (draft-ietf-taps-arch-19, draft-ietf-taps-interface-26, and draft-ietf-taps-impl-18)

2024-12-18 Thread Michael Welzl via auth48archive
> Also, I think it’s fair to say that, at this point, each and every one of you > owes me a beer :-))) > > Possibly more than one – this was a ton of work! > :-) We should include Megan (and colleagues? I have no idea about how the RFC Editor team is set up) too, her / their work was nothing s

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9706 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread RFC Editor via auth48archive
Authors, While reviewing this document during AUTH48, please resolve (as necessary) the following questions, which are also in the XML file. 1) 2) 3) 4) 5) 6) 7) 8) 9) 10) 11) 12) 13) Thank you. RFC Editor/kf/kc On Dec 18, 2024, at 6:30 PM, rfc-edi...@rf

[auth48] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9706 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread RFC Editor via auth48archive
*IMPORTANT* Updated 2024/12/18 RFC Author(s): -- Instructions for Completing AUTH48 Your document has now entered AUTH48. Once it has been reviewed and approved by you and all coauthors, it will be published as an RFC. If an author is no longer available, there are sever

[auth48] Re: Cluster-Wide Questions for Cluster 508: RFCs 9621, 9622, and 9623 (draft-ietf-taps-arch-19, draft-ietf-taps-interface-26, and draft-ietf-taps-impl-18)

2024-12-18 Thread Reese Enghardt via auth48archive
Hi Michael, Megan, all Thank you for taking on the monumental task of figuring out the capitalization. We indeed owe you a beer, Michael. I looked at the differences in RFC-to-be-9622 and 9623, and most of the changes look good to me, except for the cases below. I'm not quite sure about th

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9639 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Alice Russo via auth48archive
Martijn, Thank you for your reply. We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 page for this document (https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9639) and will publish this document shortly. Thank you for your careful review. RFC Editor/ar > On Dec 17, 2024, at 10:33 PM, Martijn van Beurden wrote:

[auth48] Re: Cluster-Wide Questions for Cluster 508: RFCs 9621, 9622, and 9623 (draft-ietf-taps-arch-19, draft-ietf-taps-interface-26, and draft-ietf-taps-impl-18)

2024-12-18 Thread Colin Perkins via auth48archive
On 17 Dec 2024, at 18:34, Michael Welzl wrote: Dear all, I am now finished with the capitalization task for the entire cluster. I’m attaching “before” and “after” versions of the XML files (filenames “-OLD.xml” and “-NEW.xml”). I would like to say that I approve publication (as Megan wrote,

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9698 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Sandy Ginoza via auth48archive
Hi Bron, We don’t believe we have heard from you regarding this document’s readiness for publication. Please review and let us know if any updates are needed or if you approve the RFC for publication. The files are available at the URLs listed below. We will wait to hear from you before conti

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9704 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Ben Schwartz via auth48archive
1. Noted at https://github.com/ietf-wg-add/draft-ietf-add-split-horizon-authority/issues/70 2. Approved 3. The current text is clear but not consistent: ".home.arpa" and ".local" are written dot-first, and "resolver.arpa." and "ipv4only.arpa." are written dot-last. I don't have a strong prefe

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9703 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Sarah Tarrant via auth48archive
Hi Shraddha, Mukul, and Samson, Mukul and Samson - Thank you for your replies. We have marked your approval on the AUTH48 status page for this document (see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9703). We will assume your assent to any further changes submitted by your coauthors unless we hear o

[auth48] Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9679 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Karen Moore via auth48archive
Dear Paul (AD) and *Authors, Thank you for providing your approval - it has been noted on the AUTH48 status page (https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9679). *Authors, all approvals have been received. Please let us know if you want to add any key words (beyond those that appear in the title).

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9623 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Megan Ferguson via auth48archive
Michael, Thank you for sending along the files updated with the capitalization guidance in response to our cluster-wide query. We have adopted these files and posted them below. Note that we have made no changes to the file submitted. Please review the files carefully as we do not make change

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9621 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Megan Ferguson via auth48archive
Michael, Thank you for sending along the files updated with the capitalization guidance in response to our cluster-wide query. We have adopted these files and posted them below. We had one follow up when reviewing this file: -with the updates to capitalization, Section 1.4 (Glossary of Key T

[auth48] Re: No longer at CDT (Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9707 for your review)

2024-12-18 Thread Lynne Bartholomew via auth48archive
Hi, Mallory. Is "Mallory Knodel (IAB, Center for Democracy and Technology)" in Appendix C of RFC-to-be 9707 still correct (because it was your affiliation at the time), or should we update your affiliation? If you'd like to update, please provide the correct affiliation information. Thank you

[auth48] Re: Cluster-Wide Questions for Cluster 508: RFCs 9621, 9622, and 9623 (draft-ietf-taps-arch-19, draft-ietf-taps-interface-26, and draft-ietf-taps-impl-18)

2024-12-18 Thread Megan Ferguson via auth48archive
Michael, Thank you for sending along these files and the guidance! We have sent replies to the individual document threads and copied them below for everyone’s convenience. We believe all of our queries have been addressed for the documents in this cluster at this time. The AUTH48 status pa

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9622 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Megan Ferguson via auth48archive
Michael, Thank you for sending along the files updated with the capitalization guidance in response to our cluster-wide query. We have adopted these files and posted them below. Note: We have made a single update to include a comma in the second sentence of the second paragraph in Section 9.1

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9707 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Lynne Bartholomew via auth48archive
Hi, Dhruv. Thank you for your prompt replies! Thanks also for the updated email address for Mallory. Is "Center for Democracy and Technology" in Appendix C still correct? We have a few more follow-up items for you: = = = = = Regarding this question and your reply: >> 12) > > > > Dhruv:

[auth48] Re: [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9679 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Paul Wouters via auth48archive
Thanks for the reminder, Approved. Paul On Wed, Dec 18, 2024 at 2:07 PM Karen Moore wrote: > Hi Paul (AD), > > This is a reminder to please review the updates to the sourcecode in > Section 6 and let us know if you approve; see > https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-auth48diff.html. > >

[auth48] [AD] AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9679 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Karen Moore via auth48archive
Hi Paul (AD), This is a reminder to please review the updates to the sourcecode in Section 6 and let us know if you approve; see https://www.rfc-editor.org/authors/rfc9679-auth48diff.html. Note from Orie: > The example of EDN was changed during auth48 but the encoded hex was not > updated. I c

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9703 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Samson via auth48archive
I also don't have any other comments and it's approved from my side. Thank you, Samson On Wed, Dec 18, 2024, 21:45 Mukul Srivastava wrote: > I have no further comments. > > Approved from my side. > > > > Thanks > > Mukul > > > > Juniper Business Use Only > > *From: *Shraddha Hegde > *Date: *Wed

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9703 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Mukul Srivastava via auth48archive
I have no further comments. Approved from my side. Thanks Mukul Juniper Business Use Only From: Shraddha Hegde Date: Wednesday, December 18, 2024 at 6:40 AM To: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org , Mukul Srivastava , kapil...@gmail.com , samson@gmail.com , xuxiaohu_i...@hotmail.com Cc: mpls-...

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9696 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Madison Church via auth48archive
Hi Authors, Zheng - We have noted your approval on the AUTH48 status page (please see https://www.rfc-editor.org/auth48/rfc9696). Yuehua - Thank you for your quick reply! We have updated the document to reflect your proposed change in the updated files below. Please review the document careful

[auth48] Re: AUTH48: RFC-to-be 9703 for your review

2024-12-18 Thread Shraddha Hegde via auth48archive
Hi, Thanks for the edits. Pls see inline for response tagged by Rgds Shraddha Juniper Business Use Only -Original Message- From: rfc-edi...@rfc-editor.org Sent: 14 December 2024 05:46 To: Shraddha Hegde ; Mukul Srivastava ; kapil...@gmail.com; samson@gmail.com; xuxiaohu_i...@hot