[regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-05.txt

2018-05-07 Thread internet-drafts 

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the 
IETF.

Title   : Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Organization 
Mapping
Authors : Linlin Zhou
  Ning Kong
  Guiqing Zhou
  Xiaodong Lee
  James Gould
Filename: draft-ietf-regext-org-05.txt
Pages   : 41
Date: 2018-05-07

Abstract:
   This document describes an Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
   mapping for provisioning and management of organization objects
   stored in a shared central repository.  Specified in Extensible
   Markup Language (XML), this extended mapping is applied to provide
   additional features required for the provisioning of organizations.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-org/

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[regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05.txt

2018-05-07 Thread internet-drafts 

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the 
IETF.

Title   : Organization Extension for the Extensible 
Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
Authors : Linlin Zhou
  Ning Kong
  Junkai Wei
  Xiaodong Lee
  James Gould
Filename: draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05.txt
Pages   : 24
Date: 2018-05-07

Abstract:
   This mapping, an extension to EPP object mappings like the EPP domain
   name mapping [RFC5731], to support assigning an organization to any
   existing object (domain, host, contact) as well as any future
   objects.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-org-ext/

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Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-05.txt

2018-05-07 Thread Linlin Zhou 
Dear all,
To respond the comments, the org drafts are updated to version 05.

Regards,
Linlin


zhoulin...@cnnic.cn
 
From: internet-drafts
Date: 2018-05-07 16:35
To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org
CC: regext
Subject: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-05.txt
 
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the 
IETF.
 
Title   : Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Organization 
Mapping
Authors : Linlin Zhou
  Ning Kong
  Guiqing Zhou
  Xiaodong Lee
  James Gould
Filename: draft-ietf-regext-org-05.txt
Pages   : 41
Date: 2018-05-07
 
Abstract:
   This document describes an Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
   mapping for provisioning and management of organization objects
   stored in a shared central repository.  Specified in Extensible
   Markup Language (XML), this extended mapping is applied to provide
   additional features required for the provisioning of organizations.
 
 
The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-org/
 
There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-regext-org-05
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-org-05
 
A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-org-05
 
 
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Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-05.txt

2018-05-07 Thread Gould, James 
Linlin,

In doing my review and validating all of the sample XML of 
draft-ietf-regext-org-05, I found the following:


  1.  Remove the double period (“…transfer status information..”) in the last 
sentence of section 4.1 “EPP Query Commands”.
  2.  In section 4.1.2 “EPP  Command”, it may be better to describe the 
“Example Registrar Inc.” example as ‘…organization object with identifier 
“registrar1362”’.
  3.  In section 4.1.2 “EPP  Command”, it may be better to describe the 
“Example Reseller Inc.” example as ‘…managed by identifier “registrar1362”’.
  4.  XML parser error - The  element in the “Example  response 
for “Example Reseller Inc.” needs to be terminated with  instead of 
.
  5.  Change title of section 4.1.3 from “EPP  Command” to “EPP 
 Query Command” and change “No EPP  command is defined in 
this document” to “No EPP  query command is defined in this document”.
  6.  XML parser error - The  value of 
clientDeleteProhibited is not valid in the “Example  command”, since 
“clientDeleteProhibited” is not a valid role status according to the 
“roleStatusType” type.  I believe the 
clientDeleteProhibited should be removed in 
sh8014reseller,
 since the goal is to remove the reseller role and not the role’s status.
  7.  Change “Registrant Contact” attributes in section 8.1 “XML Namespace” to 
IESG
  8.  Set the following values for section 7.2 “EPP Extension Registry” to 
match RFC 7451:
 *   Name of Extension: Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Organization 
Mapping
 *   Registrant Name and Email Address: IESG, 
i...@ietf.org
 *   TLDs: Any
 *   IPR Disclosure: None
 *   Status: Active
 *   Notes: None
—

JG

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James Gould
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jgo...@verisign.com

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12061 Bluemont Way
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From: regext  on behalf of Linlin Zhou 

Date: Monday, May 7, 2018 at 5:14 AM
To: regext 
Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-05.txt

Dear all,
To respond the comments, the org drafts are updated to version 05.

Regards,
Linlin

zhoulin...@cnnic.cn

From: internet-drafts
Date: 2018-05-07 16:35
To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org
CC: regext
Subject: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-05..txt

A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the 
IETF.

Title   : Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Organization 
Mapping
Authors : Linlin Zhou
  Ning Kong
  Guiqing Zhou
  Xiaodong Lee
  James Gould
Filename: draft-ietf-regext-org-05.txt
Pages   : 41
Date: 2018-05-07

Abstract:
   This document describes an Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
   mapping for provisioning and management of organization objects
   stored in a shared central repository.  Specified in Extensible
   Markup Language (XML), this extended mapping is applied to provide
   additional features required for the provisioning of organizations.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-org/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-regext-org-05
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-org-05

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-org-05


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Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05.txt

2018-05-07 Thread Gould, James 
Linlin,

In doing my review and validating all of the sample XML of 
draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05, I found the following.  All of the sample XML in 
draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05 did validate successfully.



  1.  Remove the link reference to RFC5731 in the abstract.  Running idnits 
results in the following error:

a.  The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC5731]), which it 
shouldn't.  Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the  
documents in question.

2.  In section 1 “Introduction”:

a.  Change “There may have some other roles…” to “There may be other 
roles…”.

b.  Change “…nor the registrar of records…” to “…nor the registrar of 
record…”.

c.   Change “And a privacy proxy is an entity that provides with 
individuals and organizations domain registration without exposing their 
private information” to “A privacy proxy is an entity used for domain 
registrations to protect the private information of the individuals and 
organizations” or something similar.

3.   Change title of section 4.1.3 from “EPP  Command” to “EPP 
 Query Command” and change “This extension does not add any elements 
to the EPP  command or  response described…” to “This 
extension does not add any elements to the EPP  query command or 
 query response described…”.

  1.  Change “Registrant Contact” attribute in section 7.1 “XML Namespace” to 
IESG
  2.  Set the following values for section 7.2 “EPP Extension Registry” to 
match RFC 7451:
 *   Name of Extension: Organization Extension for the Extensible 
Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
 *   Registrant Name and Email Address: IESG, 
i...@ietf.org
 *   TLDs: Any
 *   IPR Disclosure: None
 *   Status: Active
 *   Notes: None



—

JG







James Gould

Distinguished Engineer

jgo...@verisign.com



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On 5/7/18, 5:08 AM, "regext on behalf of internet-dra...@ietf.org" 
 wrote:





A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
directories.

This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of 
the IETF.



Title   : Organization Extension for the Extensible 
Provisioning Protocol (EPP)

Authors : Linlin Zhou

  Ning Kong

  Junkai Wei

  Xiaodong Lee

  James Gould

Filename: draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05.txt

Pages   : 24

Date: 2018-05-07



Abstract:

   This mapping, an extension to EPP object mappings like the EPP domain

   name mapping [RFC5731], to support assigning an organization to any

   existing object (domain, host, contact) as well as any future

   objects.





The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-org-ext/



There are also htmlized versions available at:

https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05



A diff from the previous version is available at:

https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05





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