Linlin,
In doing my review and validating all of the sample XML of
draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05, I found the following. All of the sample XML in
draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05 did validate successfully.
1. Remove the link reference to RFC5731 in the abstract. Running idnits
results in the following error:
a. The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC5731]), which it
shouldn't. Please replace those with straight textual mentions of the
documents in question.
2. In section 1 “Introduction”:
a. Change “There may have some other roles…” to “There may be other
roles…”.
b. Change “…nor the registrar of records…” to “…nor the registrar of
record…”.
c. Change “And a privacy proxy is an entity that provides with
individuals and organizations domain registration without exposing their
private information” to “A privacy proxy is an entity used for domain
registrations to protect the private information of the individuals and
organizations” or something similar.
3. Change title of section 4.1.3 from “EPP <transfer> Command” to “EPP
<transfer> Query Command” and change “This extension does not add any elements
to the EPP <transfer> command or <transfer> response described…” to “This
extension does not add any elements to the EPP <transfer> query command or
<transfer> query response described…”.
1. Change “Registrant Contact” attribute in section 7.1 “XML Namespace” to
IESG
2. Set the following values for section 7.2 “EPP Extension Registry” to
match RFC 7451:
* Name of Extension: Organization Extension for the Extensible
Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
* Registrant Name and Email Address: IESG,
i...@ietf.org<mailto:i...@ietf.org>
* TLDs: Any
* IPR Disclosure: None
* Status: Active
* Notes: None
—
JG
James Gould
Distinguished Engineer
jgo...@verisign.com
703-948-3271
12061 Bluemont Way
Reston, VA 20190
Verisign.com <http://verisigninc.com/>
On 5/7/18, 5:08 AM, "regext on behalf of internet-dra...@ietf.org"
<regext-boun...@ietf.org on behalf of internet-dra...@ietf.org> wrote:
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of
the IETF.
Title : Organization Extension for the Extensible
Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
Authors : Linlin Zhou
Ning Kong
Junkai Wei
Xiaodong Lee
James Gould
Filename : draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05.txt
Pages : 24
Date : 2018-05-07
Abstract:
This mapping, an extension to EPP object mappings like the EPP domain
name mapping [RFC5731], to support assigning an organization to any
existing object (domain, host, contact) as well as any future
objects.
The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-org-ext/
There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05
A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-org-ext-05
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