Linlin,
In doing my review and validating all of the sample XML of
draft-ietf-regext-org-05, I found the following:
1. Remove the double period (“…transfer status information..”) in the last
sentence of section 4.1 “EPP Query Commands”.
2. In section 4.1.2 “EPP <info> Command”, it may be better to describe the
“Example Registrar Inc.” example as ‘…organization object with identifier
“registrar1362”’.
3. In section 4.1.2 “EPP <info> Command”, it may be better to describe the
“Example Reseller Inc.” example as ‘…managed by identifier “registrar1362”’.
4. XML parser error - The <org:clID> element in the “Example <info> response
for “Example Reseller Inc.” needs to be terminated with </org:clID> instead of
</org:crID>.
5. Change title of section 4.1.3 from “EPP <transfer> Command” to “EPP
<transfer> Query Command” and change “No EPP <transfer> command is defined in
this document” to “No EPP <transfer> query command is defined in this document”.
6. XML parser error - The <org:role><org:status> value of
clientDeleteProhibited is not valid in the “Example <update> command”, since
“clientDeleteProhibited” is not a valid role status according to the
“roleStatusType” type. I believe the
<org:status>clientDeleteProhibited</org:status> should be removed in
<org:rem><org:contact
type=”billing”>sh8014</org:contact><org:role><org:type>reseller</org:type></org:role></org:rem>,
since the goal is to remove the reseller role and not the role’s status.
7. Change “Registrant Contact” attributes in section 8.1 “XML Namespace” to
IESG
8. Set the following values for section 7.2 “EPP Extension Registry” to
match RFC 7451:
* Name of Extension: Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Organization
Mapping
* Registrant Name and Email Address: IESG,
i...@ietf.org<mailto:i...@ietf.org>
* TLDs: Any
* IPR Disclosure: None
* Status: Active
* Notes: None
—
JG
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James Gould
Distinguished Engineer
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From: regext <regext-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of Linlin Zhou
<zhoulin...@cnnic.cn>
Date: Monday, May 7, 2018 at 5:14 AM
To: regext <regext@ietf.org>
Subject: [EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-05.txt
Dear all,
To respond the comments, the org drafts are updated to version 05.
Regards,
Linlin
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From: internet-drafts<mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org>
Date: 2018-05-07 16:35
To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org<mailto:i-d-annou...@ietf.org>
CC: regext<mailto:regext@ietf.org>
Subject: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-org-05..txt
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the
IETF.
Title : Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Organization
Mapping
Authors : Linlin Zhou
Ning Kong
Guiqing Zhou
Xiaodong Lee
James Gould
Filename : draft-ietf-regext-org-05.txt
Pages : 41
Date : 2018-05-07
Abstract:
This document describes an Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
mapping for provisioning and management of organization objects
stored in a shared central repository. Specified in Extensible
Markup Language (XML), this extended mapping is applied to provide
additional features required for the provisioning of organizations.
The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-org/
There are also htmlized versions available at:
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https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-org-05
A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-org-05
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