Here are some random things, nothing terribly important. project_summary.pdf:
* "Kazhdan-Lusztig-Vogan" should use en-dashes not hyphens (this occurs in a few other files too I think, also Sato-Tate, etc. (but not Swinnerton-Dyer!)) * "Much of the data that arises out of these projects will also be of great value to large parts of mathematics." Perhaps of great value to mathematicians, rather than mathematics per se? * It's a bit puzzling the way Sage is introduced on that page. Maybe it's okay given some context I don't know about, but it looks a bit odd there without further explanation. project_description.pdf: * Ghz => GHz (this occurs a few times) * after "possibilities", should be an em-dash. * the headings in section 2.1.1 are aligned funny. "Further KLV computations" has different indentation from the following headings. * jordan-holder, I *think* holder has an umlaut, although the internet doesn't totally agree with me.... * Is it "Wiles'" or "Wiles's"? I'm not sure, but you use both :-) * p9: write "for example" not "e.g." * "Q curve" or "Q-curve"? Pick one and stick with it. * there's a funny space between "doubly even" and the comma * p12: probably better to write "with respect to" instead of "w.r.t" * the phrase "High amounts of symmetry" sounds not-quite-right to me, but I can't think of a better way. * "Google source code system.", -- the punctuation here is wrong. I think it should be "Google source code system," said ... Stein bio: * 284 page => 284 pages * the paper on computation of p-adic heights is not "to appear", it has well and truly appeared, but you knew that :-) Tired. Must sleep. david On Jan 10, 2008, at 8:47 PM, William Stein wrote: > > Hi, > > The Screms proposal is now completely done, but it's possible for me > to make some last minute minor > typo fixes tomorrow morning. I've posted the latest version here: > http://wstein.org/grants/screms/ > > If you notice _any_ typos or mistakes at all, definitely let me know. > The proposal is supposed > to be perfect right now. > > -- william > > -- > William Stein > Associate Professor of Mathematics > University of Washington > http://wstein.org > > > --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ To post to this group, send email to sage-devel@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/sage-devel URLs: http://sage.scipy.org/sage/ and http://modular.math.washington.edu/sage/ -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
