Thanks for the review Carlos!! - I'll update all the references. Acee > On Mar 23, 2025, at 3:03 PM, Carlos Pignataro via Datatracker > <[email protected]> wrote: > > Reviewer: Carlos Pignataro > Review result: Ready > > Hi, > > Please find below the Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) review for > draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-rfc8347bis-01. > > Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-rfc8347bis-01 > Type Early Review > Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) > Reviewer Carlos Pignataro > > Summary: > > I appreciate the drive behind this -bis and commend the work! > > I found no issues on a YANG module review, particularly since the update from > 8347 is editorial. > > I do have a couiple of concerns, however: > > 1. Some references, both normative and informational, have been obsoleted: > > ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2787 (Obsoleted by RFC 6527) > ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 5246 (Obsoleted by RFC 8446) > -- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 3768 > (Obsoleted by RFC 5798) > > 2. The NIST normative reference has been withdrawn on 02/20/2025 with a > message. Follow the URL on the reference. > > [NISTIR8366] > "Guidance for NIST Staff on Using Inclusive Language in > Documentary Standards, National Institute of Standards and > Technology (NIST) Interagency or Internal Report 8366", > NISTIR 8366, April 2021, > <https://doi.org/10.6028/NIST.IR.8366>. > > I feel both issues need fixing. > > Thanks! > > Carlos. > >
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