Reviewer: Carlos Pignataro
Review result: Ready
Hi,
Please find below the Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir) review for
draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-rfc8347bis-01.
Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-rfc8347bis-01
Type Early Review
Team Routing Area Directorate (rtgdir)
Reviewer Carlos Pignataro
Summary:
I appreciate the drive behind this -bis and commend the work!
I found no issues on a YANG module review, particularly since the update from
8347 is editorial.
I do have a couiple of concerns, however:
1. Some references, both normative and informational, have been obsoleted:
** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2787 (Obsoleted by RFC 6527)
** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 5246 (Obsoleted by RFC 8446)
-- Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 3768
(Obsoleted by RFC 5798)
2. The NIST normative reference has been withdrawn on 02/20/2025 with a
message. Follow the URL on the reference.
[NISTIR8366]
"Guidance for NIST Staff on Using Inclusive Language in
Documentary Standards, National Institute of Standards and
Technology (NIST) Interagency or Internal Report 8366",
NISTIR 8366, April 2021,
<https://doi.org/10.6028/NIST.IR.8366>.
I feel both issues need fixing.
Thanks!
Carlos.
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