Dear Authors, I've read the current version of the draft and have several questions. Greatly appreciate your consideration and feedback.
- The document uses the normative language and is on the Standard track. At the same time, the behavior of the passive BFD system is entirely local and has no impact on the active BFD system. It appears like the use of normative language describing the implementation of the passive BFD system is unnecessary. It appears that the Informational track is more appropriate for this specification. - It appears that the YANG data model allows the BFD unsolicited only for the single-hop BFD. What, in your opinion, prevents allowing it for multi-hop BFD? - In the following text: The "Passive role" may change to the "Active role" when a local client registers for the same BFD session, and from the "Active role " to the "Passive role " when there is no longer any locally registered client for the BFD session. it is not clear to me as to which BFD session is the reference "for the same BFD session". Is that for the session that is already in the Up state? Or something else? - Two recommendations in the Security Considerations section: o Apply "access control" to allow BFD packets only from certain subnets or hosts. ... o Use BFD authentication. leave some serious doubts that the proposed model does bring any operational simplification compared to explicitly configuring BFD on both systems (especially to use authentication). Regards, Greg