Tom,

I've not hit "publish" yet...

> On Oct 21, 2021, at 7:39 AM, t petch <ie...@btconnect.com> wrote:
> 
> On 20/10/2021 22:00, Jeffrey Haas wrote:
>> 
>>> On Oct 20, 2021, at 4:58 PM, Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanand...@gmail.com> 
>>> wrote:
>>>> On Oct 20, 2021, at 1:53 PM, Jeffrey Haas <jh...@pfrc.org 
>>>> <mailto:jh...@pfrc.org>> wrote:
>>>> 
>>>> There's also a note in the nits that the security considerations netconf 
>>>> boilerplate is pointing to older RFCs, but I haven't seen updated 
>>>> boilerplate issued?
>>> 
>>> See Section 3.7.1 of RFC 8407 here 
>>> <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/rfc8407#section-3.7.1>.
>> 
>> Thank you, Mahesh.
>> 
>> Addressing this would close the remaining nits.
> 
> Manwhile  ...
> 
> Unless and until you register with IANA, you do not have a YANG module!

Is there a bit of IANA boilerplate we're missing for the yang module?

> 
> The web reference is ood and insecure

Previously discussed and blessed.

> 
> The title in the 'reference' clause is not that of the I-D

Which reference?  The "RFC YYYY"?

> 
> The text in the running footing is so long that it merges with prefix and 
> suffix thereof

This one will get resolved via RFC publication along with the RFC Editor.

> 
> YANG augment are commonly accompanied by a 'when' to restrict their 
> application.

The augmentations are gated on if-feature.  Is that not-sufficient?

In the case where the feature is supported, these augmentations are 
unconditionally expected to be present.

-- Jeff

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