Thanks Antoin and Jim, I've just uploaded -14. Diff here: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-14
G. > On 24 Jun 2024, at 14:43, James Galvin <gal...@elistx.com> wrote: > > The co-Chairs have reviewed the Document Shepherd writeup and are prepared to > submit the document to the IESG for consideration to be published, however > since we have the time and opportunity we would like this comment addressed. > Gavin, if you would please provide a version 14 that addresses this comment, > the Chairs will submit this document to the IESG afterwards. > Thanks! > Antoin and Jim > > > On 13 Jun 2024, at 7:39, Gould, James wrote: > Gavin, > > In reviewing -13, the update in Section 1.2.1.2 can be changed to be > singular, as in: > > To facilitate forward compatibility with future changes to the DNS protocol, > this document does not enumerate or restrict the DNS record types that can be > included in the "custom" attribute of <ttl:ttl> element. > > Thanks, > > -- > > JG > > > > James Gould > Fellow Engineer > jgo...@verisign.com > <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/jgo...@verisign.com> > > 703-948-3271 > 12061 Bluemont Way > Reston, VA 20190 > > Verisign.com <http://verisigninc.com/> > > > > > On 6/12/24, 9:45 AM, "Gavin Brown" <gavin.br...@icann.org > <mailto:gavin.br...@icann.org>> wrote: > > > > Hi all, > > > During his Document Shepherd review, Andy noticed a few issues that this > version of the draft addresses. > > > Please note the changes in the diff: > > > https://secure-web.cisco.com/1awlVaxaBOBYOrahDg4JV6ErvZGpmFQRZCrc4zcKMTe61vFIUddhJXbVkDg6NPWhm3rtooZV0FPgRstV0RFnPf8lq9kFk_J3zJ_Y2dSiO_uqTYrAuRYBe3UtBACnLAa2uAEFdo_06c01ZkmREBFfS2SCIwnfTHHLAxiGch63zpkgt_GSzVYkwa1LP1SbuzRFnJ_AnPhdX2FJ_uyfsyg2ljax4yKSJf72SIElJ8cmOlcfrHTCW2nNMXLShopcBxiij2DoWXciuPAY50FAOjr738qENj714WZGERk3wmi-8VA3yDKGtgeO9azLNB7qzqByX/https%3A%2F%2Fauthor-tools.ietf.org%2Fiddiff%3Furl2%3Ddraft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-13 > > <https://secure-web.cisco.com/1awlVaxaBOBYOrahDg4JV6ErvZGpmFQRZCrc4zcKMTe61vFIUddhJXbVkDg6NPWhm3rtooZV0FPgRstV0RFnPf8lq9kFk_J3zJ_Y2dSiO_uqTYrAuRYBe3UtBACnLAa2uAEFdo_06c01ZkmREBFfS2SCIwnfTHHLAxiGch63zpkgt_GSzVYkwa1LP1SbuzRFnJ_AnPhdX2FJ_uyfsyg2ljax4yKSJf72SIElJ8cmOlcfrHTCW2nNMXLShopcBxiij2DoWXciuPAY50FAOjr738qENj714WZGERk3wmi-8VA3yDKGtgeO9azLNB7qzqByX/https%3A%2F%2Fauthor-tools.ietf.org%2Fiddiff%3Furl2%3Ddraft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-13> > > > Most of the changes are minor, but one does affect normative language, in > Section 6, which changes a "SHOULD" to a "should". > > > The rationale for this that the preceding reference, to the SSAC SAC-025 > report, is informative, not normative. > > > I don't believe that we need another WGLC to approve this change but wanted > to flag this change in case anyone in the WG disagrees. > > > Andy has finished his review so I don't anticipate any further changes until > the AD review. > > > Thanks, > > > G. > > > > On 12 Jun 2024, at 14:03, internet-dra...@ietf.org > > <mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org> wrote: > > > > Internet-Draft draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-13.txt is now available. 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