The co-Chairs have reviewed the Document Shepherd writeup and are
prepared to submit the document to the IESG for consideration to be
published, however since we have the time and opportunity we would like
this comment addressed.
Gavin, if you would please provide a version 14 that addresses this
comment, the Chairs will submit this document to the IESG afterwards.
Thanks!
Antoin and Jim
On 13 Jun 2024, at 7:39, Gould, James wrote:
Gavin,
In reviewing -13, the update in Section 1.2.1.2 can be changed to be
singular, as in:
To facilitate forward compatibility with future changes to the DNS
protocol, this document does not enumerate or restrict the DNS record
types that can be included in the "custom" attribute of <ttl:ttl>
element.
Thanks,
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On 6/12/24, 9:45 AM, "Gavin Brown" <gavin.br...@icann.org
<mailto:gavin.br...@icann.org>> wrote:
Hi all,
During his Document Shepherd review, Andy noticed a few issues that
this version of the draft addresses.
Please note the changes in the diff:
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Most of the changes are minor, but one does affect normative language,
in Section 6, which changes a "SHOULD" to a "should".
The rationale for this that the preceding reference, to the SSAC
SAC-025 report, is informative, not normative.
I don't believe that we need another WGLC to approve this change but
wanted to flag this change in case anyone in the WG disagrees.
Andy has finished his review so I don't anticipate any further changes
until the AD review.
Thanks,
G.
On 12 Jun 2024, at 14:03, internet-dra...@ietf.org
<mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org> wrote:
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-13.txt is now available. It
is a work
item of the Registration Protocols Extensions (REGEXT) WG of the
IETF.
Title: Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) mapping for DNS
Time-To-Live (TTL) values
Author: Gavin Brown
Name: draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-13.txt
Pages: 29
Dates: 2024-06-12
Abstract:
This document describes an extension to the Extensible Provisioning
Protocol (EPP) that allows EPP clients to manage the Time-To-Live
(TTL) value for domain name delegation records.
About this draft
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