Thanks Gavin. It has been submitted to the IESG. Jim
On 24 Jun 2024, at 10:47, Gavin Brown wrote: > Thanks Antoin and Jim, I've just uploaded -14. > > Diff here: > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-14 > > G. > >> On 24 Jun 2024, at 14:43, James Galvin <gal...@elistx.com> wrote: >> >> The co-Chairs have reviewed the Document Shepherd writeup and are prepared >> to submit the document to the IESG for consideration to be published, >> however since we have the time and opportunity we would like this comment >> addressed. >> Gavin, if you would please provide a version 14 that addresses this comment, >> the Chairs will submit this document to the IESG afterwards. >> Thanks! >> Antoin and Jim >> >> >> On 13 Jun 2024, at 7:39, Gould, James wrote: >> Gavin, >> >> In reviewing -13, the update in Section 1.2.1.2 can be changed to be >> singular, as in: >> >> To facilitate forward compatibility with future changes to the DNS protocol, >> this document does not enumerate or restrict the DNS record types that can >> be included in the "custom" attribute of <ttl:ttl> element. >> >> Thanks, >> >> -- >> >> JG >> >> >> >> James Gould >> Fellow Engineer >> jgo...@verisign.com >> <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/jgo...@verisign.com> >> >> 703-948-3271 >> 12061 Bluemont Way >> Reston, VA 20190 >> >> Verisign.com <http://verisigninc.com/> >> >> >> >> >> On 6/12/24, 9:45 AM, "Gavin Brown" <gavin.br...@icann.org >> <mailto:gavin.br...@icann.org>> wrote: >> >> >> >> Hi all, >> >> >> During his Document Shepherd review, Andy noticed a few issues that this >> version of the draft addresses. >> >> >> Please note the changes in the diff: >> >> >> https://secure-web.cisco.com/1awlVaxaBOBYOrahDg4JV6ErvZGpmFQRZCrc4zcKMTe61vFIUddhJXbVkDg6NPWhm3rtooZV0FPgRstV0RFnPf8lq9kFk_J3zJ_Y2dSiO_uqTYrAuRYBe3UtBACnLAa2uAEFdo_06c01ZkmREBFfS2SCIwnfTHHLAxiGch63zpkgt_GSzVYkwa1LP1SbuzRFnJ_AnPhdX2FJ_uyfsyg2ljax4yKSJf72SIElJ8cmOlcfrHTCW2nNMXLShopcBxiij2DoWXciuPAY50FAOjr738qENj714WZGERk3wmi-8VA3yDKGtgeO9azLNB7qzqByX/https%3A%2F%2Fauthor-tools.ietf.org%2Fiddiff%3Furl2%3Ddraft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-13 >> >> <https://secure-web.cisco.com/1awlVaxaBOBYOrahDg4JV6ErvZGpmFQRZCrc4zcKMTe61vFIUddhJXbVkDg6NPWhm3rtooZV0FPgRstV0RFnPf8lq9kFk_J3zJ_Y2dSiO_uqTYrAuRYBe3UtBACnLAa2uAEFdo_06c01ZkmREBFfS2SCIwnfTHHLAxiGch63zpkgt_GSzVYkwa1LP1SbuzRFnJ_AnPhdX2FJ_uyfsyg2ljax4yKSJf72SIElJ8cmOlcfrHTCW2nNMXLShopcBxiij2DoWXciuPAY50FAOjr738qENj714WZGERk3wmi-8VA3yDKGtgeO9azLNB7qzqByX/https%3A%2F%2Fauthor-tools.ietf.org%2Fiddiff%3Furl2%3Ddraft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-13> >> >> >> Most of the changes are minor, but one does affect normative language, in >> Section 6, which changes a "SHOULD" to a "should". >> >> >> The rationale for this that the preceding reference, to the SSAC SAC-025 >> report, is informative, not normative. >> >> >> I don't believe that we need another WGLC to approve this change but wanted >> to flag this change in case anyone in the WG disagrees. >> >> >> Andy has finished his review so I don't anticipate any further changes until >> the AD review. >> >> >> Thanks, >> >> >> G. >> >> >>> On 12 Jun 2024, at 14:03, internet-dra...@ietf.org >>> <mailto:internet-dra...@ietf.org> wrote: >>> >>> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-13.txt is now available. 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