Based on the call to action in the meeting yesterday to get involved I'll add my +1 as well (and +1 to the changes proposed by James).
// Eric Skoglund, The Swedish Internet Foundation (.se & .nu) ________________________________ From: regext <regext-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of Gould, James <jgould=40verisign....@dmarc.ietf.org> Sent: 06 May 2024 14:30 To: mario.loffredo=40iit.cnr...@dmarc.ietf.org <mario.loffredo=40iit.cnr...@dmarc.ietf.org>; gal...@elistx.com <gal...@elistx.com>; regext@ietf.org <regext@ietf.org> Subject: Re: [regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-08 I support publication, so +1. Upon a re-review of -08, and I have the following nit feedback: Section 1.2.1.2 “Supported DNS record types” "This eliminates the need to update this document in the event that new DNS records that exist above a zone cut (Section 7 of [RFC9499]) see is specified.". I believe that "see" needs to be removed, where it would read "...above a zone cut (Section 7 of [RFC9499]) is specified" or "...above a zone cut (see Section 7 of [RFC9499]) is specified". Address the multiple which’s in the paragraph below, such as: “A server that receives a <create> or <update> command, which includes an invalid DNS record type, MUST respond with a 2004 "Parameter value range" error.” Section 1.2.1.2.1 "Glue records" Update second paragraph to remove the multiple which's, such as: “A server supporting host objects which receives a command that attempts to set TTL values for A and AAAA records on a domain object MUST respond with a 2004 "Parameter value range" error.” Section 2.1.1 “EPP <info> command” Add comma to be consist to the Default Mode bullet, such as: “The Policy Mode (Section 2.1.1.2<https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl#policy-mode>), which …“ Section 2.1.1.1 “Default Mode” Update the first paragraph by addressing the run on sentence and use double quotes for the attributes and values (“0” and “false”), such as: “If a server receives an <info> command for a domain or host object which includes a <ttl:info> element with a “policy” attribute value of “0” or “false”, then the EPP response MUST contain <ttl:ttl> elements for all DNS record types that have non-default TTL values. These elements MUST NOT have the “min”, “default” and “max” attributes.” Section 2.1.1.2 “Policy Mode” Update the first paragraph by addressing the run on sentence and use double quotes for the attributes and values (“1” and “true”), such as: “If a server receives an <info> command for a domain or host object which includes a <ttl:info> element with a “policy” attribute value of “1” or “true”, then the EPP response MUST contain <ttl:ttl> elements for all supported DNS record types, irrespective of whether those record types are in use by the object in question.” These elements MUST have the “min”, “default” and “max” attributes.” Section 5.1 “Operational impact of TTL values” Revise the first paragraph for readability, such as: “Domain registry operators must consider the balance between the registrant desire for domain changes to be visible in the DNS quickly, and the increased DNS query traffic that short TTLs can bring. Historically, registry operators have used a global TTL value for all delegations within their zones, which could then be tuned to an optimum value.” Thanks, -- JG James Gould Fellow Engineer jgo...@verisign.com <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/jgo...@verisign.com> 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 Verisign.com <http://verisigninc.com/> On 5/6/24, 3:27 AM, "regext on behalf of Mario Loffredo" <regext-boun...@ietf.org <mailto:regext-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of mario.loffredo=40iit.cnr...@dmarc.ietf.org <mailto:40iit.cnr...@dmarc.ietf.org>> wrote: Caution: This email originated from outside the organization. Do not click links or open attachments unless you recognize the sender and know the content is safe. +1 Mario Il 29/04/2024 16:27, James Galvin ha scritto: > The document editors have indicated that the following document is ready for > submission to the IESG to be considered for publication as a Proposed > Standard: > > Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) mapping for DNS Time-To-Live (TTL) > values > https://secure-web.cisco.com/1c1FkOdAKZ0pc8IHVuo4T0I5emiofMuSpTU--2s4xgNy06ipCF6iplze1N6Lt1ZW2FZ9y_CrkZaKrecsE7C6PKABKg9DciQ-01ZbJ1SRYlci293K7rKSFSxftmPGCFXDAGSYVWLfZmtQa68W2wS3k_aZ04bbVHBLMcYuAVRguqe9zQPz9TdbRuBGKTW-Slt8Ebd9HwZRRbRVn_h9YKPE9iWBrofBCMRVbcAmE9t0HJv1060Qe_bwZBUCeSkV2b44GNVF4epB4DJUQz7grrvEUNxBQiSEZnaK0l8aHRzSEXew/https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl%2F08%2F > > <https://secure-web.cisco.com/1c1FkOdAKZ0pc8IHVuo4T0I5emiofMuSpTU--2s4xgNy06ipCF6iplze1N6Lt1ZW2FZ9y_CrkZaKrecsE7C6PKABKg9DciQ-01ZbJ1SRYlci293K7rKSFSxftmPGCFXDAGSYVWLfZmtQa68W2wS3k_aZ04bbVHBLMcYuAVRguqe9zQPz9TdbRuBGKTW-Slt8Ebd9HwZRRbRVn_h9YKPE9iWBrofBCMRVbcAmE9t0HJv1060Qe_bwZBUCeSkV2b44GNVF4epB4DJUQz7grrvEUNxBQiSEZnaK0l8aHRzSEXew/https%3A%2F%2Fdatatracker.ietf.org%2Fdoc%2Fdraft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl%2F08%2F> > > Please indicate your support or no objection for the publication of this > document by replying to this message on list (a simple “+1” is sufficient). > > If any working group member has questions regarding the publication of this > document please respond on the list with your concerns by close of business > everywhere, Monday, 13 May 2024. > > If there are no objections the document will be submitted to the IESG. > > The Document Shepherd for this document is Andy Newton. > > Thanks, > > Antoin and Jim > REGEXT WG Co-Chairs > > _______________________________________________ > regext mailing list > regext@ietf.org <mailto:regext@ietf.org> > https://secure-web.cisco.com/1BCU29KkyrRwXsVnp2SCDnWq8JA-lZcDf-1PUkJB0ixWpHA1iSWHnLCFKwW51BeUqekjUmq-mP9IpgZgNMZsHMOCV__s352UM6oCzAmrVhzMkVxk5E_p-DN5euABUCFpJjnu-orG1au2TUONfaFotfFc-A_l_FZieXpz9PqUyNT2-oBRdb0vkwy9FjRHl-oi9SCuuuSdbhuFwEQRnrxwWBNUu1Hw5S4ksV4KFOp3QcJmX9FwXYkaEsXC30Oq0QqAZnXlFV5EjTV0aqJsUdkB5KyipEp8sQrvQxpe1HnUk2Fo/https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Fmailman%2Flistinfo%2Fregext > > <https://secure-web.cisco.com/1BCU29KkyrRwXsVnp2SCDnWq8JA-lZcDf-1PUkJB0ixWpHA1iSWHnLCFKwW51BeUqekjUmq-mP9IpgZgNMZsHMOCV__s352UM6oCzAmrVhzMkVxk5E_p-DN5euABUCFpJjnu-orG1au2TUONfaFotfFc-A_l_FZieXpz9PqUyNT2-oBRdb0vkwy9FjRHl-oi9SCuuuSdbhuFwEQRnrxwWBNUu1Hw5S4ksV4KFOp3QcJmX9FwXYkaEsXC30Oq0QqAZnXlFV5EjTV0aqJsUdkB5KyipEp8sQrvQxpe1HnUk2Fo/https%3A%2F%2Fwww.ietf.org%2Fmailman%2Flistinfo%2Fregext> -- Dott. 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