Allow me †o pile on with a +1 on the document. I sent Gavin a few nits that I had, and a rhetorical question of EPP server operators publishing their TTL policies.
tim On Thu, May 9, 2024 at 9:04 AM Rick Wilhelm <Rwilhelm= 40pir....@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote: > +1 (inclusive of Jim’s nits, which Gavin recently acknowledged, obv) > > > > Thx > > Rick > > > > > > *From: *regext <regext-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of Gould, James > <jgould=40verisign....@dmarc.ietf.org> > *Date: *Monday, May 6, 2024 at 2:30 PM > *To: *mario.loffredo=40iit.cnr...@dmarc.ietf.org <mario.loffredo= > 40iit.cnr...@dmarc.ietf.org>, James Galvin <gal...@elistx.com>, > regext@ietf.org <regext@ietf.org> > *Subject: *[EXTERNAL] Re: [regext] WGLC: draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-08 > > *CAUTION: This email came from outside your organization. Don’t trust > emails, links, or attachments from senders that seem suspicious or you are > not expecting.* > ------------------------------ > > I support publication, so +1. > > > > Upon a re-review of -08, and I have the following nit feedback: > > > > Section 1.2.1.2 “Supported DNS record types” > > > > "This eliminates the need to update this document in the event that new > DNS records that exist above a zone cut (Section 7 of [RFC9499]) see is > specified.". I believe that "see" needs to be removed, where it would read > "...above a zone cut (Section 7 of [RFC9499]) is specified" or "...above a > zone cut (see Section 7 of [RFC9499]) is specified". > > > > Address the multiple which’s in the paragraph below, such as: > > > > “A server that receives a <create> or <update> command, which includes an > invalid DNS record type, MUST respond with a 2004 "Parameter value range" > error.” > > > > > > Section 1.2.1.2.1 "Glue records" > > > > Update second paragraph to remove the multiple which's, such as: > > > > “A server supporting host objects which receives a command that attempts > to set TTL values for A and AAAA records on a domain object MUST respond > with a 2004 "Parameter value range" error.” > > > > Section 2.1.1 “EPP <info> command” > > > > Add comma to be consist to the Default Mode bullet, such as: > > > > “The Policy Mode (Section 2.1.1.2 > <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl#policy-mode>), > which …“ > > > > Section 2.1.1.1 “Default Mode” > > > > Update the first paragraph by addressing the run on sentence and use > double quotes for the attributes and values (“0” and “false”), such as: > > > > “If a server receives an <info> command for a domain or host object which > includes a <ttl:info> element with a “policy” attribute value of “0” > or “false”, then the EPP response MUST contain <ttl:ttl> elements for all > DNS record types that have non-default TTL values. These elements MUST > NOT have the “min”, “default” and “max” attributes.” > > > > Section 2.1.1.2 “Policy Mode” > > > > Update the first paragraph by addressing the run on sentence and use > double quotes for the attributes and values (“1” and “true”), such as: > > > > “If a server receives an <info> command for a domain or host object which > includes a <ttl:info> element with a “policy” attribute value of “1” > or “true”, then the EPP response MUST contain <ttl:ttl> elements for all > supported DNS record types, irrespective of whether those record types are > in use by the object in question.” These elements MUST have > the “min”, “default” and “max” attributes.” > > > > Section 5.1 “Operational impact of TTL values” > > > > Revise the first paragraph for readability, such as: > > > > “Domain registry operators must consider the balance between the > registrant desire for domain changes to be visible in the DNS quickly, and > the increased DNS query traffic that short TTLs can bring. Historically, > registry operators have used a global TTL value for all delegations within > their zones, which could then be tuned to an optimum value.” > > > > Thanks, > > > > > > -- > > > > JG > > > > > > > > James Gould > > Fellow Engineer > > jgo...@verisign.com > <applewebdata://13890C55-AAE8-4BF3-A6CE-B4BA42740803/jgo...@verisign.com> > > > > 703-948-3271 > > 12061 Bluemont Way > > Reston, VA 20190 > > > > Verisign.com <http://verisigninc.com/> > > > > > > > > > > On 5/6/24, 3:27 AM, "regext on behalf of Mario Loffredo" < > regext-boun...@ietf.org <mailto:regext-boun...@ietf.org> on behalf of > mario.loffredo=40iit.cnr...@dmarc.ietf.org <mailto: > 40iit.cnr...@dmarc.ietf.org>> wrote: > > > > > > Caution: This email originated from outside the organization. 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