Gurshabad,
 
I first need to be clear that I oppose adding both sections that you've 
provided to draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode.  The sections that you've 
provided are non-technical and are associated with policy elements.  The REGEXT 
working group has dealt with technical aspects of drafts.  I don't believe the 
REGEXT working group is qualified to effectively discuss and come to consensus 
on policy elements.  I recommend that inclusion of these sort of elements be 
brought up to the IETF-level.
 
The thread with Andrew Newton did not clarify the applicability of the Privacy 
Considerations, but addressed two technical issues related to fixing the 
described relationship of the client with the server, and fixing the 
inappropriate inclusion of a normative policy statement.  The clearly out of 
scope elements of the HR Considerations section include the following bulleted 
items that are only associated with the VSP, and have nothing to do with 
draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode.      
 
    * Depending on the information shared with the VSP and data sources
    already available to it, the extension may also allow the VSP to
    discriminate against registrants based on registrants' personal
    characteristics, beliefs, or opinions. Even when such restrictions are
    not applied, knowledge of the information being shared with the VSP
    could create chilling effects on registrants' freedom of expression, and
    freedom of association and assembly.
   
    * The VSP may be a third party entrusted to carry out sensitive legal
    decisions. Due to the lack of mechanisms in this extension that can
    facilitate appeal and redressal of a rejection, the registrants' right
    to legal transparency and remedy will also be impacted in such a situation. 
  
 
The scope of draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode does not include the 
verification process of the VSP by design.   Any considerations section, 
including the HR or the Privacy Considerations, need to be within the defined 
scope of the draft.
 
Do others in the working group believe that either the verification process of 
the VSP is in scope based on the current wording of the draft or that a 
consideration section can cover something that is outside the defined scope of 
the draft?
  
—
 
JG



James Gould
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On 12/21/18, 5:14 AM, "Gurshabad Grover" <gursha...@cis-india.org> wrote:

    On 20/12/18 1:01 AM, Gould, James wrote:
    > 
    > Your proposed Privacy Considerations section and much of your proposed 
Human Rights Considerations section focuses on the interface of the VSP, which 
is out-of-scope for draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode.  The scope of 
draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode is on the structure of the digitally signed 
verification code, that represents proof of verification, and the interface 
between the client (registrar) and the server (registry) to pass the 
verification code.  The role of the VSP is defined, but the VSP interface and 
the concrete verifications is by design left out of 
draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode, and therefore is out-of-scope.  
    >  
    
    I think the previous thread with Andrew Newton clarifies why the Privacy
    Considerations are applicable. Could you be specific as to which HR
    consideration is out of scope?
    
    As you have already noted, the role of the VSP is defined and (therefore
    presumably) in the scope of the document. Since most HR considerations
    relate to the VSP's role, they are also in the scope of
    draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode.
    
    Thank you.
    Gurshabad
    
    

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