Gurshabad, I first need to be clear that I oppose adding both sections that you've provided to draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode. The sections that you've provided are non-technical and are associated with policy elements. The REGEXT working group has dealt with technical aspects of drafts. I don't believe the REGEXT working group is qualified to effectively discuss and come to consensus on policy elements. I recommend that inclusion of these sort of elements be brought up to the IETF-level. The thread with Andrew Newton did not clarify the applicability of the Privacy Considerations, but addressed two technical issues related to fixing the described relationship of the client with the server, and fixing the inappropriate inclusion of a normative policy statement. The clearly out of scope elements of the HR Considerations section include the following bulleted items that are only associated with the VSP, and have nothing to do with draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode. * Depending on the information shared with the VSP and data sources already available to it, the extension may also allow the VSP to discriminate against registrants based on registrants' personal characteristics, beliefs, or opinions. Even when such restrictions are not applied, knowledge of the information being shared with the VSP could create chilling effects on registrants' freedom of expression, and freedom of association and assembly. * The VSP may be a third party entrusted to carry out sensitive legal decisions. Due to the lack of mechanisms in this extension that can facilitate appeal and redressal of a rejection, the registrants' right to legal transparency and remedy will also be impacted in such a situation. The scope of draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode does not include the verification process of the VSP by design. Any considerations section, including the HR or the Privacy Considerations, need to be within the defined scope of the draft. Do others in the working group believe that either the verification process of the VSP is in scope based on the current wording of the draft or that a consideration section can cover something that is outside the defined scope of the draft? — JG
James Gould Distinguished Engineer jgo...@verisign.com 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 Verisign.com <http://verisigninc.com/> On 12/21/18, 5:14 AM, "Gurshabad Grover" <gursha...@cis-india.org> wrote: On 20/12/18 1:01 AM, Gould, James wrote: > > Your proposed Privacy Considerations section and much of your proposed Human Rights Considerations section focuses on the interface of the VSP, which is out-of-scope for draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode. The scope of draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode is on the structure of the digitally signed verification code, that represents proof of verification, and the interface between the client (registrar) and the server (registry) to pass the verification code. The role of the VSP is defined, but the VSP interface and the concrete verifications is by design left out of draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode, and therefore is out-of-scope. > I think the previous thread with Andrew Newton clarifies why the Privacy Considerations are applicable. Could you be specific as to which HR consideration is out of scope? As you have already noted, the role of the VSP is defined and (therefore presumably) in the scope of the document. Since most HR considerations relate to the VSP's role, they are also in the scope of draft-ietf-regext-verificationcode. Thank you. Gurshabad _______________________________________________ regext mailing list regext@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/regext