Hi, here are my review comments for v19-0001.

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doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml

nitpick - Now there is >1 option. /The following option is supported:/The
following options are supported:/

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src/backend/access/transam/twophase.c

TwoPhaseTransactionGid:
nitpick - renamed parameter /gid/gid_res/ to emphasize that this is
returned by reference

~~~

1.
IsTwoPhaseTransactionGidForSubid
+ /* Construct the format GID based on the got xid */
+ TwoPhaseTransactionGid(subid, xid, gid_generated, sizeof(gid));

I think the wrong size is being passed here. It should be the buffer size
-- e.g. sizeof(gid_generated).

~

nitpick - renamed a couple of vars for readability
nitpick - expanded some comments.

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src/backend/commands/subscriptioncmds.c

2. AlterSubscription
+ /*
+ * slot_name and two_phase cannot be altered
+ * simultaneously. The latter part refers to the pre-set
+ * slot name and tries to modify the slot option, so
+ * changing both does not make sense.
+ */

I had given a v18-0002 nitpick suggestion to re-word all of this comment.
But, as I wrote before [1], that fix belongs here in patch 0001 where the
comment was first added.

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[1]
https://www.postgresql.org/message-id/CAHut%2BPsqMRS3dcijo5jsTSbgV1-9So-YBC7PH7xg0%2BZ8hA7fDQ%40mail.gmail.com

Kind Regards,
Peter Smith.
Fujitsu Australia
diff --git a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
index cba6661..24c57fb 100644
--- a/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
+++ b/doc/src/sgml/protocol.sgml
@@ -2192,7 +2192,7 @@ psql "dbname=postgres replication=database" -c 
"IDENTIFY_SYSTEM;"
        </varlistentry>
       </variablelist>
 
-      <para>The following option is supported:</para>
+      <para>The following options are supported:</para>
 
       <variablelist>
        <varlistentry>
diff --git a/src/backend/access/transam/twophase.c 
b/src/backend/access/transam/twophase.c
index f710030..b426f0b 100644
--- a/src/backend/access/transam/twophase.c
+++ b/src/backend/access/transam/twophase.c
@@ -2689,7 +2689,7 @@ LookupGXact(const char *gid, XLogRecPtr prepare_end_lsn,
  * Return the GID in the supplied buffer.
  */
 void
-TwoPhaseTransactionGid(Oid subid, TransactionId xid, char *gid, int szgid)
+TwoPhaseTransactionGid(Oid subid, TransactionId xid, char *gid_res, int szgid)
 {
        Assert(subid != InvalidRepOriginId);
 
@@ -2698,7 +2698,7 @@ TwoPhaseTransactionGid(Oid subid, TransactionId xid, char 
*gid, int szgid)
                                (errcode(ERRCODE_PROTOCOL_VIOLATION),
                                 errmsg_internal("invalid two-phase transaction 
ID")));
 
-       snprintf(gid, szgid, "pg_gid_%u_%u", subid, xid);
+       snprintf(gid_res, szgid, "pg_gid_%u_%u", subid, xid);
 }
 
 /*
@@ -2710,20 +2710,26 @@ static bool
 IsTwoPhaseTransactionGidForSubid(Oid subid, char *gid)
 {
        int                     ret;
-       Oid                     subid_written;
-       TransactionId xid;
+       Oid                     subid_from_gid;
+       TransactionId xid_from_gid;
        char            gid_generated[GIDSIZE];
 
-       ret = sscanf(gid, "pg_gid_%u_%u", &subid_written, &xid);
+       /* Extract the subid and xid from the given GID. */
+       ret = sscanf(gid, "pg_gid_%u_%u", &subid_from_gid, &xid_from_gid);
 
-       /* Return false if the given GID has different format */
-       if (ret != 2 || subid != subid_written)
+       /*
+        * Check that the given GID has expected format, and at least the subid
+        * matches.
+        */
+       if (ret != 2 || subid != subid_from_gid)
                return false;
 
-       /* Construct the format GID based on the got xid */
-       TwoPhaseTransactionGid(subid, xid, gid_generated, sizeof(gid));
-
-       /* ...And check whether the given GID is exact same as the format GID */
+       /*
+        * Reconstruct a tmp GID based on the subid and xid extracted from
+        * the given GID. Check that the tmp GID and the given GID match.
+        */
+       TwoPhaseTransactionGid(subid_from_gid, xid_from_gid,
+                                                  gid_generated, 
sizeof(gid_generated));
        return strcmp(gid, gid_generated) == 0;
 }
 

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