From: Fujii Masao <masao.fu...@oss.nttdata.com> Sent: Wednesday, July 3, 2024 7:44 PM > > On 2024/07/03 17:51, hajime.matsun...@nttdata.com wrote: > > Thanks for the suggestions the other day. > > I have created a patch that incorporates your suggestions. > > - <structname>pg_stat_database</structname></link>, in the output of > + <structname>pg_stat_database</structname></link> and > + <link linkend="monitoring-pg-stat-io-view"> > + <structname>pg_stat_io</structname></link>, in the output of > > I'm not a native English speaker, but it seems more natural to use a comma > instead of "and" before "pg_stat_io." > > - of block read and write times. > + of block read, block write, extend, and fsync times. > > "block" before "fsync" doesn't seem necessary.
I'm also not a native English speaker, so I appreciate your feedback. I have created a patch that incorporates your feedback. Regards, -- Hajime Matsunaga NTT DATA Group Corporation
v3-0001-Doc-fix-track_io_timing-description-to-mention-pg.patch
Description: v3-0001-Doc-fix-track_io_timing-description-to-mention-pg.patch
