On 2024/07/08 12:01, hajime.matsun...@nttdata.com wrote:
From: Fujii Masao <masao.fu...@oss.nttdata.com>
Sent: Wednesday, July 3, 2024 7:44 PM
On 2024/07/03 17:51, hajime.matsun...@nttdata.com wrote:
Thanks for the suggestions the other day.
I have created a patch that incorporates your suggestions.
- <structname>pg_stat_database</structname></link>, in the output of
+ <structname>pg_stat_database</structname></link> and
+ <link linkend="monitoring-pg-stat-io-view">
+ <structname>pg_stat_io</structname></link>, in the output of
I'm not a native English speaker, but it seems more natural to use a comma instead of
"and" before "pg_stat_io."
- of block read and write times.
+ of block read, block write, extend, and fsync times.
"block" before "fsync" doesn't seem necessary.
I'm also not a native English speaker, so I appreciate your feedback.
I have created a patch that incorporates your feedback.
Thanks for updating the patch! Pushed.
Regards,
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Fujii Masao
Advanced Computing Technology Center
Research and Development Headquarters
NTT DATA CORPORATION
