I like Steve's suggestions here, Bob. These stand out for me: Normally, I don't pay much attention to cell phone shots, but this one is intersting. http://www.web-options.com/Carmelites/content/L1000080_large.html
Well seen. http://www.web-options.com/Carmelites/content/DSCF0181_large.html This one reminds me of the shot I took of the construction workers eating lunch /www.web-options.com/Carmelites/content/DSCF0218_large.html If I had to pick for an essay, I might start with this--this would be just a 1st rough draft 1,21,35,20, 17, 36, 28, 7, 26, 10, 12, 11, 27, 37, 13, 4, 23, 22. Remember, this is just a quick run-through-draft; I would definitely make changes as I thought about it. Not sure this is of any help to you, but I gave it a quick stab. Cheers, Chirstine On Jul 26, 2011, at 12:33 PM, steve harley wrote: > On 2011-07-26 04:11 , Bob W wrote: >> A couple of weeks ago I photographed the annual procession from the Italian >> church in London, and posted a picture of an angel. >> >> This is the full set, which I've been unable to edit down below the number >> of shots here, sorry. It shows the preparation for the procession, the >> procession itself, and the spectators: >> <http://www.web-options.com/Carmelites/> >> >> Hope you enjoy. Any hints as to how I can best cut it down and turn it into >> a tighter essay would be most appreciated. > > i especially liked the close-ups of the procession participants, along with a > some of the bystanders; i think the bystanders could be a separate essay, > trimmed of the less ironic shots, and the procession could stand on its own > with only a few group shots and mostly close-ups > > alternatively, pair some of the procession close-ups in more direct contrast > with bystander shots, e.g. lady bearing umbrella/j.c. bearing cross, black > king/man in cardigan, couple in black/mary with babe, woman and girl > eating/roman tickling j.c. > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow > the directions. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
