Thanks a lot, for review and comments, Mike.

Please responses inline <S>. I’ll submit updated version when the draft 
submissions will be unblocked.

Regards,
Samuel

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# IESG review of draft-ietf-pce-circuit-style-pcep-extensions-14

CC @MikeBishop

## Comments

### Section 2, paragraph 0

Thank you for this thorough Terminology section.

### Section 4.1, paragraph 1

This is the first use of the term "O flag" for the Strict-Path flag.
Consider using one name consistently throughout the document, or connecting the
terms more explicitly if you must retain both for consistency with existing
documents.

<S> I’ll make it more consistent. There is already similar flag for stateless 
messages in RFC5440 and that RFC is calling it “O bit”, so I’ll make it 
consistent with that.

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

### Typos

<S> Sure, I can fix those.

#### Section 3.3, paragraph 1
```
-    The PATH-MODIFICATION TLV is optional.  If the TLV is included in
+    The PATH-MODIFICATION TLV is optional.  If the TLV is included in the
+                                                                     ++++
```

#### Section 3.3, paragraph 1
```
-    processed, subsequent instances MUST be ignored.
-             ^
+    processed; subsequent instances MUST be ignored.
+             ^
```

#### Section 4.1, paragraph 4
```
-    The flag is applicable only for stateful messages.  Existing O flag
-                                                        ^
+    The flag is applicable only for stateful messages.  The existing O flag
+                                                        ^^^^^
```



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