Mahesh Jethanandani has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-pce-circuit-style-pcep-extensions-14: No Objection
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-circuit-style-pcep-extensions/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Section 4.1, paragraph 4 > If the O flag is set to 1 (either in the LSP-EXTENDED-FLAG TLV for > stateful messages or in the RP object for stateless messages) for SR > paths introduced in [RFC8664], the PCE MUST use only Segment > Identifiers (SIDs) that explicitly specify adjacencies for packet > forwarding. Adjacency SIDs should be used, but Prefix SIDs must not > be used (even if there is only one adjacency). Please use BCP14 keywords: s/Adjacency SIDs should be used, but Prefix SIDs must not be used/Adjacency SIDs SHOULD be used, but Prefix SIDs MUST NOT be used/ The IANA review of this document seems to not have concluded yet. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- NIT ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you did with these suggestions. Section 8.4, paragraph 6 > EPS: Usage of TLS to Provide a Secure Transport for the Path Computation Ele > ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "Secure Transport". _______________________________________________ Pce mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
