Hi,

Mainly, this is ready IMHO, except:

> 3.1.  General Discussion
> 
>    IPv6 [RFC2460] EHs allow for the extension of the IPv6 protocol

Obsolete reference. Should be RFC8200.

This applies throughout the document, but section 3.4.2  "Routing Header
for IPv6 (Protocol Number=43)" needs some rewording. RFC8200 no longer
specifies RH0. Suggestion:

a) keep RFC2460 but as an Informative reference.
b) start section 3.4.2.2 like this:

   This EH is specified in [RFC8200].  The obsolete specification [RFC2460]
   originally specified the Routing Header Type 0, which was later obsoleted
   by [RFC5095].

   At the time of this writing, the following Routing Types have been
   specified:

   o  Type 0: Source Route (DEPRECATED) [RFC2460] [RFC5095]

The rest stays the same, but note the two remaining references to 2460.

Regards
   Brian

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