Mahesh Jethanandani <mjethanand...@gmail.com> wrote:
    > As a follow-up, I am reviewing the comments provided by others to make
    > sure they have been addressed. Erik Kline made the following comment,
    > for which I do not see a diff. I do notice that the word “geofenced”
    > has been taken out, but there is still a use of the term “geofencing”,
    > for which Erik’s comment still applies.

I found "geofencing", and replaced with tailored response.

    > ### S6.4

    > * I suggest finding some text to point to that defines what a "geofenced"
    > name is.  Right now this feels like the kind of thing that everyone
    > "just knows what it means", but could use some formal description.

I'm sad that we did not put this term in RFC8499bis.
Meanwhile, we have a new list: DNSLB, which deals exactly with this topic.
           
    > Then there is the comment from John Scudder, which says:

    > The last para of the Intro is:

    > ```
    > The Security Considerations section covers some of the negative
    > outcomes should MUD/firewall managers and IoT manufacturers choose
    > not to cooperate.
    > ```

    > It doesn't, though. I guess either fix the SecCons to do what the Intro
    > says, or change the Intro to accurately describe the SecCons.

I shall edit the introduction I think: I think that in the end, we have removed 
all
the bad consequences, but I'll think on exactly how to update the text.




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