Hi Michael, Thanks for addressing Roman’s DISCUSS and COMMENTs. I have put a ballot of YES, so the document can move ahead.
As a follow-up, I am reviewing the comments provided by others to make sure they have been addressed. Erik Kline made the following comment, for which I do not see a diff. I do notice that the word “geofenced” has been taken out, but there is still a use of the term “geofencing”, for which Erik’s comment still applies. ### S6.4 * I suggest finding some text to point to that defines what a "geofenced" name is. Right now this feels like the kind of thing that everyone "just knows what it means", but could use some formal description. Then there is the comment from John Scudder, which says: The last para of the Intro is: ``` The Security Considerations section covers some of the negative outcomes should MUD/firewall managers and IoT manufacturers choose not to cooperate. ``` It doesn't, though. I guess either fix the SecCons to do what the Intro says, or change the Intro to accurately describe the SecCons. Looking at the thread in the archives, I do not see what was the resolution to his comment. Same for comments from Murray, Zahed, and Martin. Even though the document was restructured between -12/-13 and now, some of those comments still apply. It would therefore be helpful if you can go through them, and assert which ones have been addressed. Thanks. > On Jul 3, 2024, at 5:27 PM, Michael Richardson <mcr+i...@sandelman.ca> wrote: > > > I've posted version -16 just now. This contains a few minor edits that I > hope will address Roman's comments. > > A diff against -14 might be more useful; it also addresses comments from > Pascal. > > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-14&url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-16&difftype=--html > > Name: draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations > Revision: 16 > Title: Operational Considerations for Use of DNS in IoT Devices > Date: 2024-07-03 > Group: opsawg > Pages: 20 > URL: > https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-16.txt > Status: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations/ > HTML: > https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-16.html > HTMLized: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations > Diff: > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-16 > > -- > Michael Richardson <mcr+i...@sandelman.ca> . o O ( IPv6 IøT consulting ) > Sandelman Software Works Inc, Ottawa and Worldwide Mahesh Jethanandani mjethanand...@gmail.com
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