On Mon, Jul 05, 2010 at 03:16:38PM +0300, Raz wrote: > Hey linux il and others > In http://sos-linux.svn.sourceforge.net/viewvc/sos-linux/LinuxHebrew/ > you'll find a small book for linux beginners in pdf format and doc > format. anyone willing to send his reviews and remarks please send it > to me to this email. please edit it in word and use "track changes". > access: > Simply download file one at a time through the web interface. > In case you wish to add an entire section, you'll be acknowledged.
Looks nice. A few points: 1. What's the point in keeping all of those files under version control? Why not just use some FTP directory? 2. The book seems to use screenshots extensively. I can't copy text from a screenshot. Please try to use actual text rather than a screenshot if the window in case is a terminal. This will also greatly reduce the size of the file (well, not really, as you keep all the history in the file). 3. You write about ls: ls מקבלת תווים מיוחדים שתפקידם לייצג תבנית חיפוש , סימן הכוכב* מייצג מספר כלשהו של תווים I hope you explain later on that this is not ls that interperts those wildcards. 4. rar is in the same class as tar (archiver) not as gzip (simpple file/stream compressor). Nobody really uses rar, and there's really no use mentioning it (you have not mentioned "rar-nonfree" and where exactly rar 3.x archives are supported. Let's just avoid the topic altogether). Maybe consider mentioning zip / unzip. One other question: does Docbook work well for Hebrew? Anybody tried it? -- Tzafrir Cohen | tzaf...@jabber.org | VIM is http://tzafrir.org.il | | a Mutt's tzaf...@cohens.org.il | | best tzaf...@debian.org | | friend _______________________________________________ Linux-il mailing list Linux-il@cs.huji.ac.il http://mailman.cs.huji.ac.il/mailman/listinfo/linux-il
